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18．假如你是李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Ryan King將到你校來(lái)交流學(xué)習(xí)，為期半年．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫封信，向他大致介紹一下你校的基本情況．字?jǐn)?shù)在120 左右．
內(nèi)容至少應(yīng)包括以下幾點(diǎn)
①校所處的地理位置；
②校出行的交通；
③�；�本設(shè)施、師資力量；
④學(xué)生的課外活動(dòng)及教育教學(xué)亮點(diǎn)．
Dear Peter，
No words can express my excitement on hearing that you are coming to our school．I hope the following information my help you learn something about it．
Our school is as old as the city．Located in the city centre，it has a very convenient transportation system．There are quite a few buses，trains，subways that you can take when you want to leave or leave for our school．As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型二）There is also one lecture hall where the students can enjoy lectures of different topics．
What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型三）Most important of all，we have teachers who come from teachers'training universities or institutions．They love their work and students，always sparing no effort to guide the students and satisfy their needs．And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型四）
In brief，no choice is better than choosing our school．I am waiting for your coming．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你的美國(guó)朋友Ryan King將到你校來(lái)交流學(xué)習(xí)，為期半年．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫封信，向他大致介紹一下你校的基本情況，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：①校所處的地理位置；②校出行的交通；③校基本設(shè)施、師資力量；④學(xué)生的課外活動(dòng)及教育教學(xué)亮點(diǎn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Located in坐落于；is equipped with配備有；What's more而且；Most important of all最重要的是；spare no effort to 不遺余力的去做；In brief簡(jiǎn)而言之；
As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型一）
What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型二）
And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
       No words can express my excitement on hearing that you are coming to our school．I hope the following information my help you learn something about it．
      Our school is as old as the city．Located in the city centre，it has a very convenient transportation system．There are quite a few buses，trains，subways that you can take when you want to leave or leave for our school．As a key middle school，it is equipped with well-qualified facilities，such as two library buildings，in which you can read various books，magazines，newspapers，etc； one laboratory building for teachers and students to do experiments．（高分句型一）There is also one lecture hall where the students can enjoy lectures of different topics．
       What's more，you can build your body and your sports interest in some places，like a swimming pool，one gymna sium and one fitness centre，where various out-class activities can be experienced．（高分句型二）Most important of all，we have teachers who come from teachers'training universities or institutions．They love their work and students，always sparing no effort to guide the students and satisfy their needs．And through different students associations，the students will get the opportunities to put what they have learned into practice，find fun in learning as well．（高分句型三）
        In brief，no choice is better than choosing our school．I am waiting for your coming．
                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．