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20．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中有
10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞．
     2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
Recently campus safety has become public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should always come firstly in our daily life．
In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．

Answer 1

分析 短文主要講了如何采取措施來保證校園安全．

解答 Recently campus safety has become∧public concern since a series of violent attacks happened，which causes serious damage．It makes us aware of the fact that safety should
                                                    a                                                                                                  caused
always come firstly in our daily life．
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In this case，we should take effective measure which can solve this problem．Firstly，our students should realize we must follow our school or traffic rules，and pay attention
                                                        measures                                                                                                                                         and
to food safety，because many incidents happen just because of we are too careless．Secondly，you should take training of security so that we can keep calm if faced with
                                                                                                                                            we
conflicts．Thirdly，our government and schools should provide surroundings that our students can be buried in studying．
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As far as I am concerned，improving campus safety is very important that we all should try our best to make anyone on campus safe and sound．
                                                                                 so                                                                            everyone
1．在become和public之間加a，考查冠詞，concern作為名詞，是可數(shù)名詞，表示泛指前應使用不定冠詞a．
2．causes改成caused，考查時態(tài)，表示過去發(fā)生的動作，應使用一般過去時．
3．firstly改成first，考查副詞，first本身就是副詞，修飾動詞come．
4．measure改成measures，考查名詞，measure"措施"是可數(shù)名詞，此處應使用復數(shù)形式．
5．or改成and，考查連詞，此處應是并列的關系，而不是選擇，因此or改為and．
6．去掉of，考查連詞，此處because后接的是從句，因此of去掉．
7．you改成we，考查代詞，短文使用的是第一人稱復數(shù)we，因此代詞改為we．
8．that改成where，考查定語從句，句子先行詞是surroundings，在從句中充當?shù)攸c狀語，因此使用where引導．
9．very改成so，考查固定句型，so…that…"如此…以致于…"．
10．a(chǎn)nyone改成everyone，考查代詞，根據(jù)語境應是"每一個人"使用everyone．

點評 這是高考的必考題型之一．在平時學習過程中，一定要注意基礎方面．做此類題，一般分為幾步：第一瀏覽全文，知道文章大意及主體時態(tài)；第二逐句理解，逐句改正．一般采取從粗到細的原則，如句意通順的情況下，看句式結(jié)構(gòu)、固定短語有有沒有用錯．具體到單詞，我們常講名詞注意單復數(shù)，動詞注意謂語、非謂語，形容詞注意副詞及比較級，從句注意連接詞等．最后不要忘記重新過一遍文章，是否不當之處．