Question

假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備在高中畢業(yè)后的暑假參加美國(guó)耶魯大學(xué)的暑假課程，(Yale summer session 2015)請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給負(fù)責(zé)人Ms Sullivan，說(shuō)明自己的情況并詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)事宜。具體內(nèi)容如下：
介紹自己寫(xiě)郵件的原因。
詢(xún)問(wèn)暑假課程的設(shè)置情況(course arrangement)（如課程內(nèi)容，課程數(shù)量，時(shí)間安排等）
詢(xún)問(wèn)參加暑假課程期間的住宿情況（如是否可以住在學(xué)校的宿舍里等）
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好。
Dear Ms Sullivan,
I’m li hua ,a middle school student from china.               
                                                          
                                                          
                                                          
Yours sincerely , 
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms. Sullivan,
I’m Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I’ll graduate from high school this year, and I’m planning to apply for the Yale Summer Session 2013. Now I’m writing to ask about several questions concerned.
Firstly, I’m curious to know about the course arrangement. How many courses will you offer in all and what subjects will it cover? Since I’m interested in computer science very much, I would very much like to take computer related courses. I would also want to know the time schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places in America on weekends.
Secondly, can you introduce boarding arrangement during the Summer Session? Are all the students living on campus or shall we rent houses in advance?
Thank you!
Looking forward to your reply!
Best regards,
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文。假定你是李華，準(zhǔn)備在高中畢業(yè)后的暑假參加美國(guó)耶魯大學(xué)的暑假課程，(Yale summer session 2015)請(qǐng)寫(xiě)一封電子郵件給負(fù)責(zé)人Ms Sullivan，說(shuō)明自己的情況并詢(xún)問(wèn)相關(guān)事宜。具體內(nèi)容如下：介紹自己寫(xiě)郵件的原因。詢(xún)問(wèn)暑假課程的設(shè)置情況(course arrangement)（如課程內(nèi)容，課程數(shù)量，時(shí)間安排等）。詢(xún)問(wèn)參加暑假課程期間的住宿情況（如是否可以住在學(xué)校的宿舍里等）。需要寫(xiě)的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I would also want to know the time schedule of these courses to see whether I’ll have time to visit other places in America on weekends. 這里含有一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句。