Question

1．假定你是李華，你的外教 James 明天下午要做一個關(guān)于"互聯(lián)網(wǎng)+"的講座，你因故不能參加，請根據(jù)以下要點給他寫一封電子郵件．
1．表達歉意；
2．解釋原因；
3．詢問是否有講座的相關(guān)資料．
注意：
1．可適當加入細節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充實，行文連貫；
2．詞數(shù)100詞左右，信的抬頭和落款已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．
3．參考詞匯：互聯(lián)網(wǎng)+Internet Plus
Dear James，
                                                   
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一封電子郵件．寫作要點為：1．表達歉意；2．解釋原因；3．詢問是否有講座的相關(guān)資料．寫作時人稱以第一人稱為主，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．
重點詞匯：apologize for （為了…而道歉）；take part in （參加）；accidentally（意外地，偶然地）；or so（大約，左右）；To be frank（說實話，坦率地說）
高分句型：1．The reason ①for my being absent is ②that my right leg is hurt．
                ①介詞短語作后置定語；②that引導一個從句，作系動詞be的表語．
                2．The doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so．
                suggest作"建議"講引導從句時，從句用"should+動詞原形"，should可以省略．
                3．Wish your lecture a great success．
                 wish接復合賓語表示祝愿．

解答 Dear James，
I am writing to apologize for not being able to attend your lecture tomorrow afternoon，which is on Internet Plus．
The reason for my being absent is that my right leg is hurt（高分句型一）．I took part in a basketball game last week and I hurt my right leg accidentally．The doctor suggests that I should lie in bed for one week or so（高分句型二）．To be frank，I am extremely interested in the topic of Internet Plus．Therefore，it is really a pity that I will miss it．I wonder if there are any relevant materials of the lecture．If so，I can learn it myself when it is convenient．
Wish your lecture a great success（高分句型三）．
Yours，

點評 考生在寫作提綱類作文時應(yīng)注意不能漏掉所給出的幾個要點，在寫作中要選擇正確的時態(tài)和語態(tài)，思路清晰，針對每一要點，可以做出適當補充，以達到有理有據(jù)，并注意上下文的銜接．