Question

【題目】假設你是紅星中學高三學生李華。上周你們班組織了一次班會，邀請去年畢業(yè)的同學回校交流。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖的先后順序，寫一篇英文周記，記述整個過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Last week, our class invited a graduate to give us some suggestions on what we should do during the most important year in high school.

The graduate arrived at the scheduled time. We were delighted to see him and eager to hear the wisdom he was about to pass on to us. After a brief greeting in response to our warm applause, our guest began his talk. He first shared his study plan he made for his senior year and emphasized the importance of time management, which left me a deep impression. Afterwards, he vividly described his interesting college life. Inspired by his words, we all listened attentively and took notes.

Before seeing him off, I asked him how to review for the exam and how to balance the busy school life with some kind of relaxation, on which he gave some enlightening ideas.

That night, I had the most fulfilling time setting my short-term and long-term goals as well as planning for my future study. I’m now full of confidence and energy, and prepared to give 100% for my ambition and dreams.

【解析】

這是一篇圖畫類作文。要求考生用英語寫一篇英文周記記述班會的整個過程。

第一步：審題

體裁：圖畫類作文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般過去時。

結構：總分法

要求：按照4幅圖畫的先后順序寫一篇英文周記記述班會的整個過程。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

invited；suggestion；scheduled；eager to；emphasize

第三步：連詞成句

1. Last week, our class invited a graduate to give us some suggestions on what we should do during the most important year in high school.

2. The graduate arrived at the scheduled time.

3. We were delighted to see him and eager to hear the wisdom he was about to pass on to us.

4. After a brief greeting in response to our warm applause, our guest began his talk.

5. He first shared his study plan he made for his senior year and emphasized the importance of time management, which left me a deep impression.

6. Afterwards, he vividly described his interesting college life.

7. Before seeing him off, I asked him how to review for the exam and how to balance the busy school life with some kind of relaxation, on which he gave some enlightening ideas.

8. That night, I had the most fulfilling time setting my short-term and long-term goals as well as planning for my future study.

9. I’m now full of confidence and energy, and prepared to give 100% for my ambition and dreams.

第四步：連句成篇

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉折對比關系：while, meanwhile, However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。