【題目】上周你參加了學(xué)校組織的演講比賽,并獲一等獎(jiǎng)。由于你的英語(yǔ)老師Mr.Wang對(duì)你這次參賽提供了許多幫助,現(xiàn)在你想寫(xiě)一封電子郵件對(duì)他表示感謝并與他分享比賽過(guò)程及獲獎(jiǎng)感受。

內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹參賽情況;

2.告知獲獎(jiǎng)情況;

3.表達(dá)對(duì)老師的感謝。

Dear Mr. Wang,

________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【答案】I am writing to express my heartfelt gratitude to you for offering timely help and professional guidance during my preparation for the speech contest.

As the only competitor from our class, I had to compete against other 14 excellent participants in front of the whole school, which put me under great pressure the instant I stepped on the stage.// However, at the thought of your suggestions and instructions. I calmed myself down instantly and then everything went so smoothly that the judges and audience gave me a big round of applause at end of the competition.// The second I knew I was the winner of the first prize, I couldn’t wait to share with you the exciting news because without your timely help and professional guidance. I couldn’t have made it.

Please accept my gratitude, now and always. I will move on to make further progress to live up to you expectation in the future. May you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!

【解析】本文屬于感謝信。感謝信的寫(xiě)作格式一般分為三段。

本文屬于感謝信。感謝信的寫(xiě)作格式一般分為三段。

第一段表達(dá)感謝之情并說(shuō)明原因(告知獲獎(jiǎng)情況;)。第二段細(xì)述介紹參賽情況。第三段再次闡述謝意并表達(dá)回報(bào)愿望。

分析:本文格式正確,內(nèi)容完整,行文連貫。運(yùn)用了三個(gè)復(fù)雜句,讓文章的語(yǔ)法更為嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)復(fù)雜。運(yùn)用了多種句式,如狀語(yǔ)從句,賓語(yǔ)從句等。同時(shí)還運(yùn)用了許多高級(jí)詞匯,為文章增添了亮點(diǎn)

本文的第二段使用了三個(gè)復(fù)雜句:(1)As the only competitor from our class, I had to compete against other 14 excellent participants in front of the whole school, which offering timely help and professional guidance the instant I stepped on the stage。(2)I calmed myself down instantly and then everything went so smoothly that the judges and audience gave me a big round of applause at end of the competition。(3)The second I knew I was the winner of the first prize, I couldn’t wait to share with you the exciting news because without your timely help and professional guidance。這三個(gè)復(fù)雜句讓文章的內(nèi)容緊湊而成為一個(gè)有機(jī)整體。

在復(fù)雜句中包含了由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句,由as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句,由so…that…引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句,及以the second引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,以及由because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。最后一段用一個(gè)祁使句(May you have a healthy body and lead a happy life!)完美地結(jié)束本文。

本文同時(shí)使用了大量的的高級(jí)詞匯:express my heartfelt gratitude,offer timely help and professional guidance,at the thought of your suggestions and instructions.,everything go so smoothly, give me a big round of applause, without your timely help and professional guidance. I couldn’t have made it, make further progress to live up to you expectation.給文章增添了色彩和亮點(diǎn)。

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