分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息昨天,你的同班同學李越做了一件好事.請你根據(jù)根據(jù)事情的經(jīng)過(買了束花去醫(yī)院看朋友,但是護士不許帶入監(jiān)護病房,等電梯時看到一位傷心的醫(yī)院工作人員,把花送給了她),用英語寫個題目為Flowers For A Stranger 100-120個詞的博客,寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點包括:事情的經(jīng)過;你的評論 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達:a bunch of flowers一束花;head for前往;as though好像,仿佛;take care of 照顧;be grateful表示感激的;
The nurse told me he couldn't bring flowers into the ICU so he left them outside feeling really disappointed.(高分句型一)
He saw a hospital personnel leaning up against the wall looking tired and stressed and as though she'd been crying.(高分句型二)
I'm so grateful that Li Yue gave that woman a listening ear and support when she needed it.(高分句型三)
解答 Flowers For A Stranger
Yesterday Li Yue went to the hospital to visit a friend in the Intensive Care Unit.He stopped by the gift shop and got a bunch of flowers to take to him.
The nurse told me he couldn't bring flowers into the ICU so he left them outside feeling really disappointed.(高分句型一)After his visit he headed for the elevator.He saw a hospital personnel leaning up against the wall looking tired and stressed and as though she'd been crying.(高分句型二)He asked if she was okay.They chatted for a minute.He handed the flowers to her,saying"I think you might need these more than I do right now."He patted her on the shoulder and told her to take care of herself.Her face positively lit up and tears came to her eyes as she thanked me.
I'm so grateful that Li Yue gave that woman a listening ear and support when she needed it.(高分句型三)He saw an opportunity for kindness and took action.He has inspired me.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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