根據(jù)下面提示寫一篇短文

1. 簡述以下現(xiàn)象:

1)健康之重要人盡皆知。

2)許多青少年不注重健康問題,假期尤甚。長時間看電視,通宵上網(wǎng)聊天、玩游戲。導(dǎo)致的危害如:影響視力,身體虛弱,缺乏人際交往。

2. 簡述你的看法,提出你的建議。

要求:(1)內(nèi)容完整,層次清楚,語言流暢。

2)詞數(shù)120左右,標題已給出,不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯:交流communicate;心理健康 mental health

Have a healthy lifestyle

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Have a healthy lifestyle

As we all know, health is very important. Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.

However, many teenagers don't pay any attention to their health, especially during the holiday. And they spend too much time watching TV, playing games and chatting on the Internet all night, which is bad for their health. First, this may make them get near-sighted. Besides, their bodies become much weaker. Thirdly, they will lose the chance to communicate with others face to face as they never go out, which may have a bad effect on their mental health.

In my opinion, they should spend less time in front of the TV or the computer, go out to take some exercises, play some sports and visit some friends and have a healthy lifestyle.

【解析】

試題分析:題目是一個材料作文,作文的框架和寫作要點已經(jīng)給出,寫作難度不大。可以分三部分來寫,第一部分總述現(xiàn)象;第二部分詳細描述現(xiàn)象;第三部分給出自己的看法和建議。使用第一人稱進行寫作;注意標點符號、拼寫、時態(tài)和語法知識的正確運用;一定要用上參考詞匯。

【亮點說明】范文使用了一些重要的語法知識:倒裝句Only when we are healthy can we study well and enjoy life.;非限制性定語從句which is bad for their healthwhich may have a bad effect on their mental health;非謂語動詞playing games and chatting on the Internet all night;語法知識運用靈活、得體;

范文還使用了較多的短語和固定搭配:pay any attention to, spend too much time watching TV, make them get near-sighted, become much weaker, the chance to communicate with, face to face, as they never go out, in front of等,使作文顯得內(nèi)容充實;

范文注意使用As we all know, However, In my opinion, especially等銜接上下文;使用First, Besides, Thirdly進行列舉,使作文語意連貫,富有條理性和層次性;

考點:材料類作文

 

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