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20．假定你是來(lái)自澳大利亞的高三學(xué)生Tom，愛好廣泛，性格開朗，到中國(guó)某高中學(xué)習(xí)中文．該校流行音樂俱樂部正在招聘新成員，要求會(huì)某種樂器、嗓音好且有團(tuán)隊(duì)意識(shí)．你希望加入該俱樂部．請(qǐng)用英文寫一封申請(qǐng)信，要點(diǎn)如下：
個(gè)人基本情況；
加入俱樂部的目的及滿足加入俱樂部的條件；
自己的聯(lián)系方式（電話：12345678；郵箱：tom101@hotmail．com）．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：不少于100；             2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)使行文連貫；
3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Sir/Madam，
POP CLUB attracts me deeply．I'm Tom，a senior 3 student from Australian．I have many interests，especially music．I am good at playing guitar．I also love singing popsongs and people tell me my voice sounds beautiful．In addition，I have a strong team spirit．I want to improve my spokenChinese by joining the club．When there is an activity，I will be more than happy to serve as the host，which，I believe，can strengthen my skills andimprove my abilities．What's more，I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there．
I would appreciate it if you can allow me to join the club soplease email me on tom101@hotmail．com or call me at 12345678．
Yours sincerely，
Tom．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文．根據(jù)所提供的材料信息，寫一封申請(qǐng)信，申請(qǐng)加入校流行音樂俱樂部．寫作要點(diǎn)：1．個(gè)人基本情況；2．加入俱樂部的目的及滿足加入俱樂部的條件；3．自己的聯(lián)系方式（電話：12345678；郵箱：tom101@hotmail．com）．寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主．重要短語(yǔ)：be good a doing sth （擅長(zhǎng)做某事），sound beautiful（聽起來(lái)動(dòng)聽），in addition（除…還），have a strong team spirit （有強(qiáng)烈的團(tuán)隊(duì)精神），join the club（參加俱樂部），serve as （充當(dāng)，作為），strengthen one's skills （增強(qiáng)某人的技能），improve one's abilities（增強(qiáng)某人的能力），allow sb to（允許某人做某事）．

【高分句型】
1．I will be more than happy to serve as the host，which，I believe，can strengthen my skills and improve my abilities．
這里是由which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，指代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容，定語(yǔ)從句中"I believe"為插入語(yǔ)．
2．I would appreciate it if you can allow me to join the club so please email me on tom101@hotmail．com or call me at 12345678．
這里是由it作形式賓語(yǔ)，if you can allow me to join the club so please email me on tom101@hotmail．com or call me at 12345678作真正的賓語(yǔ)，常用結(jié)構(gòu)為"I appreciate/love/like/hate/dislike+it+if/when…"．

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
POP CLUB attracts me deeply．
I'm Tom，a senior 3 student from Australian．I have many interests，especially music．I am good at playing guitar．I also love singing popsongs and people tell me my voice sounds beautiful．（個(gè)人基本情況）
In addition，I have a strong team spirit．I want to improve my spoken Chinese by joining the club．When there is an activity，I will be more than happy toserve as the host，which，I believe，can strengthen my skills and improve my abilities．【高分句型】What's more，I believe that I can make many Chinese friends there．（加入俱樂部的目的及滿足加入俱樂部的條件）
I would appreciate it if you can allow me to join the club soplease email me on tom101@hotmail．com or call me at 12345678．【高分句型】（自己的聯(lián)系方式：電話、郵箱）
Yours sincerely，
Tom

點(diǎn)評(píng) 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語(yǔ)和重要句型．