Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你將參加今年夏天在你市舉辦的國際音樂夏令營，該夏令營面向世界各地愛好演奏樂器的學生。請給你的英國朋友Harry寫信，邀請他一同參加該夏令營。要點應包括：

1．夏令營的有關介紹；

2．你的邀請；

3．夏令營每天的活動安排：

上午：專家授課

下午：練習樂器數(shù)小時

晚上：music exchange concert(學生表演，演奏自己國家的音樂)

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Harry，

I have good news for you.

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Harry，

I have good news for you. There will be an international music camp in our city this summer, which is open to students from all over the world who are interested in playing musical instruments. I know you are a music lover, so why not join the camp together with us?

At the camp, campers are given classes by experts in the morning and in the afternoon they do a couple of hours of practice. In the evening, there is a music exchange concert where campers can give performances and play different kinds of music from their own countries.

I'm sure you will have a lot of fun there. I'm looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封信，邀請英國朋友Harry一同參加夏令營。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構：總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說，把支持句作為分說，并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求：

1．夏令營的有關介紹；

2．你的邀請；

3．夏令營每天的活動安排：

上午：專家授課

下午：練習樂器數(shù)小時

晚上：music exchange concert(學生表演，演奏自己國家的音樂)

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

There will be；why not；a couple of；kinds of；looking forward to

第三步：連詞成句

There will be an international music camp in our city this summer, which is open to students from all over the world who are interested in playing musical instruments.

I know you are a music lover, so why not join the camp together with us?

At the camp, campers are given classes by experts in the morning and in the afternoon they do a couple of hours of practice.

In the evening, there is a music exchange concert where campers can give performances and play different kinds of music from their own countries.

I'm sure you will have a lot of fun there. I'm looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補充關系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改