Question

12．請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語為某品牌一款智能手機寫一篇促銷說明．

必要性	手機是人們聯(lián)系工具之一．
顏色	黑色和白色
功能	收發(fā)短信，照相，上1，下載音樂，瀏覽1頁…
其他	MP4、自選游戲…

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
參考詞匯：瀏覽 browse
Thanks for choosing our smart phones．As we know，mobile phones have become the most important way of communication，with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are．（高分句型一）
This product of us has many different functions to meet different needs，such as sending or receiving short messages．Besides，you won′t take pains to carry your camera any more，for the mobile phone itself has one．（高分句型二）Thus，you can take pictures whenever you like．What′s more，with the function of surfing the Internet，it allows you to browse web pages and download what you want．（高分句型三）It can even bring you a flood of music and movies．Most importantly，it can be used as an MP4 as well as a computer game player．
As for colours，we offer you the choice between white and black．．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于圖表類作文，根據(jù)提示信息請根據(jù)下列提示，用英語為某品牌一款智能手機寫一篇促銷說明，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點包括：必要性，顏色，功能等 2、圖表是文章的總體框架，要在圖表的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As we know眾所周知；get in touch with 與…取得聯(lián)系；Besides另外；Thus因此；What′s more而且；Most importantly更重要的是；  As for 至于，關(guān)于；as well as也，和
As we know，mobile phones have become the most important way of communication，with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are．（高分句型一）
Besides，you won′t take pains to carry your camera any more，for the mobile phone itself has one．（高分句型二）
What′s more，with the function of surfing the Internet，it allows you to browse web pages and download what you want．（高分句型三）

解答 Thanks for choosing our smart phones．As we know，mobile phones have become the most important way of communication，with which we can get in touch with each other wherever and whenever we are．（高分句型一）
       This product of us has many different functions to meet different needs，such as sending or receiving short messages．Besides，you won′t take pains to carry your camera any more，for the mobile phone itself has one．（高分句型二）Thus，you can take pictures whenever you like．What′s more，with the function of surfing the Internet，it allows you to browse web pages and download what you want．（高分句型三）It can even bring you a flood of music and movies．Most importantly，it can be used as an MP4  as well as a computer game player．
      As for colours，we offer you the choice between white and black．

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．