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18．假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請(qǐng)你介紹你最喜歡的一個(gè)節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日的原因．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)他的問題回復(fù)郵件．
提示詞語：eat，get together，share，happy，special．
注意：1．開頭語已給出
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：100字左右
Hi!Tom，
I'm glad to hear that…
you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
Best wishes to you．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你叫李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Tom給你發(fā)來一份電子郵件，表示對(duì)中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日非常感興趣．他想請(qǐng)你介紹你最喜歡的一個(gè)節(jié)日，如端午節(jié)、中秋節(jié)、春節(jié)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：你通常是怎么慶祝的，以及你喜歡這個(gè)節(jié)日的原因  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be interested in對(duì)…感興趣；traditional Chinese festivals中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日；in the shape of 以…的形狀；In short總之
On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）
In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）

解答 Hi!Tom，
       I'm glad to hear that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals．My favorite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival．It usually comes in September or October．On that day，our family members usually get together and have a nice meal．（高分句型一）After that，I always admire the moon and share mooncakes with my families．
       I love this festival because I like eating mooncakes．They are in the shape of a full moon．They carry people's wishes to the families they love and miss．In short，the Mid-Autumn Festival is a  special day of pleasure and happiness．（高分句型二）I hope that my letter will help you know more about Chinese festivals．
       Best wishes to you．
                                                                
 Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．