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5．每位同學(xué)都希望自己具有良好的人際關(guān)系，成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇題為"Being a Popular Student"的英語(yǔ)短文，參加學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語(yǔ)論壇的討論．
受人喜愛(ài)的個(gè)性品質(zhì)對(duì)待集體熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，具有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，工作負(fù)責(zé)，…
對(duì)待他人尊重、關(guān)心他人，富有同情心，…
對(duì)待自己（請(qǐng)考生自己實(shí)際擬定內(nèi)容，列舉至少兩點(diǎn)） …

注意：1．對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯．
2．詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Being a Popular Student
We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers
                                  

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分析 每位同學(xué)都希望自己具有良好的人際關(guān)系，成為班級(jí)中受歡迎的人．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇題為"Being a Popular Student"的英語(yǔ)短文，參加學(xué)校網(wǎng)站英語(yǔ)論壇的討論．受人喜愛(ài)的個(gè)性品質(zhì)：對(duì)待集體---熱心班級(jí)活動(dòng)，具有團(tuán)隊(duì)精神，工作負(fù)責(zé)，…；對(duì)待他人---尊重、關(guān)心他人，富有同情心，…；對(duì)待自己---（請(qǐng)考生自己實(shí)際擬定內(nèi)容，列舉至少兩點(diǎn)） …．寫作時(shí)對(duì)所給要點(diǎn)，逐一陳述，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡(jiǎn)單翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫．寫作時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫全，語(yǔ)句通順，同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞，同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩．注意：詞數(shù)150左右．開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．開頭運(yùn)用了動(dòng)詞不定式做目的狀語(yǔ)，并在句尾使用了省略；While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．引導(dǎo)詞加現(xiàn)在分詞運(yùn)用恰如其分；To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．定語(yǔ)從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語(yǔ)在句中巧妙結(jié)合；All in all，popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．句中運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句；另外，文章中還使用了As a result、be strict with、In time of success、All in all等高級(jí)詞組，使文章更加豐富多彩．

解答 Being a Popular Student
    We all hope to be popular with our classmates and teachers．To enjoy popularity，we are supposed to regard the class as our big family and even offer to sacrifice our personal interests whenever necessary．（高分句型一）While taking an active part in all our class activities，we should work responsibly to build up a good reputation as a team．（高分句型二）（受人喜愛(ài)的個(gè)性品質(zhì)）
    To be students with high popularity，we are to show respect，concern and sympathy for others．（高分句型三）As a result，we never hesitate to lend a hand to those in need．（對(duì)待他人）
    To be a popular student，we ought to be strict with ourselves in everything we do at school and make every effort to achieve all-round development，being good not only at our lessons but also at sports，music，painting，social services and so on．（高分句型三）In time of success we remain modest，while in time of difficulty we keep strong-minded．（對(duì)待自己）
    All in all，popularity among classmates and teachers comes naturally to those who keep improving their personal qualities．（高分句型四）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．