Question

假如你是某中學校刊記者，上周一你班舉行了一次題為“如何學好英語”的班會。同學們積極討論并提出了一些好的學習方法。請你根據(jù)下面表格所提供的信息表述同學們的觀點，并提出你學習英語的建議（至少兩條）
注意：
1. 開頭已給出。
2. 詞數(shù)不少于60。

在校內(nèi)	積極參與課堂活動
	認真完成作業(yè)
在校外	看美劇
	看英文小說
我的建議	1）… 2）… …

Last Monday, we held a heated discussion about how to learn English well. ______________                                                                
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Answer 1

Last Monday we held a heated discussion about how to learn English well. Many of us put forward some good suggestions. At  school ,for example, some of my classmates thought it was important to take an active part in the classroom activities and carefully do the homework.. For after school activities, some classmates recommended watching American TV show to improve our listening and speaking skills. Others agreeed that reading English novels was also a good way to practice English.
I think all the suggestions are helpful. As for me, I prefer listening attentively to the teacher in class and form a habit of collecting useful words and expressions. What’s more, writing to my pen-pal in America helps me improve my English a lot.
I hope everyone can find their own ways to learn English well.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達這些要點以外，還要闡述自己的觀點，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了較多的詞組： put forward 提出， take an active part in積極參加， a good way to do sth做…的好辦法，
As for至于， form a habit of doing養(yǎng)成…的習慣， writing to my pen-pal in America helps me improve my English a lot.這句話用了動名詞做主語。還有文章還使用 What’s more讓文章更連貫。