Question

【題目】書面表達(dá)

假定你是李華，你的網(wǎng)友Charlie正在美國(guó)的一家孔子學(xué)院學(xué)習(xí)中國(guó)文化，他讀到“孟母三遷”的圖片文字，不太理解“昔孟母，擇鄰處”故事的內(nèi)容，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件，要點(diǎn)如下：

1．簡(jiǎn)要介紹“孟母三遷”的故事；

2．說明故事的教育意義：

3．歡迎他來中國(guó)學(xué)習(xí)。

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右。

2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．開頭語已為你寫好。

4．參考詞匯：孟母三遷：Mencius’Mother Moving three times

Dear Charlie，

I’m glad to hear that you are learning Chinese culture in Confucius Institute．

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Yours，

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

I am so glad to hear that you are learning Chinese culture in Confucius Institute.

Mencius’ mother Moving Three Times tells about how Mencius’ mother moved again and again to provide her son with a good study environment,because her son was so much influenced by the people in the neighborhood. Finally, they came to a place near a school. Mencius’ mother was satisfied as the people living here were well educated. The story shows that the environment is very important for a kid’s study. And nowadays, people value a lot.

In fact, there is so much to learn about Chinese culture and I am sure you can learn more if you came to study in China.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語be glad to高興；Chinese culture中國(guó)文化；Confucius Institute孔子學(xué)院；was influenced by被...影響；value a lot.評(píng)價(jià)很高；In fact事實(shí)上等。