Question

10．加拿大高中生Tom在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上登出啟示．希望結(jié)識一位中國朋友，以便學(xué)習(xí)中國的語言、文化．假設(shè)你是李華，請?jiān)诳吹竭@則啟示后，用英文給Tom 發(fā)一封電子郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．有幸得知Tom愿望；
2．愿意成為他的朋友；
2．打算如何幫助他；
3．期待他的回復(fù)．
注意：
1．字?jǐn)?shù)：120-150；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；
3．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I am Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．
我很高興在網(wǎng)上看到你的發(fā)帖，也得知到你想交一個中國的朋友以便更好的學(xué)習(xí)中國文化和語言．
高分句型二：
I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．我想我可以以發(fā)郵件的方式幫你了解中國．
句型一 ①I know you want to make friends with a Chinese 該句的謂語部分使用了固定短語：make friends with sb 與某人交朋友
           ②in order to learn the Chinese…該處使用了不定式位于句尾作目的狀語
句型二 ①I can help you to know about China 該句是一個賓語從句，省略了引導(dǎo)詞that ②by sending e-mails 此處是固定用法：by doing sth 通過做某事 用作方式狀語

解答 Dear Tom，
    I am Li Hua．I am glad to read your notice on the Internet and I know you want to make friends with a Chinese in order to learn the Chinese language and culture．（高分句型一）I would like to be your friend．Now I would like to introduce myself to you．I was born in Xi′an city in 1990．I am studying in Chang′an No.1High School and I am fluent in English and Chinese．（自我介紹）I think I can help you to know about China by sending e-mails．（高分句型二）What′s more，we can have chats on the Internet in Chinese and I will send e-mail to tell you the customs，the festivals，the food of the Chinese．If It is convenient to you，please come to China for a visit．（提出邀請）I will show you around many places of interest．I hope we can keep in touch with each other．I am looking forward to your reply．
Yours
Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，考生在寫作時應(yīng)注意盡量的將所給要點(diǎn)描述清楚，再結(jié)合實(shí)際情況，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡潔明了的語言將作文闡述清楚．