假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)學(xué)生卜曼宜，請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給消費(fèi)者協(xié)會(huì)(consumers' association)寫一封投訴信，講述一次糟糕的旅行。

1. 乘坐的大巴老化、車內(nèi)擁擠、空調(diào)打不開、半路上還出了故障；

2. 旅館服務(wù)差、飯菜不可口、房間小且不干凈；

3. 導(dǎo)游更熱衷于帶游客購物。

4. 投訴要求：旅行社向游客道歉，改進(jìn)旅游服務(wù)，退賠部分旅行費(fèi)用

注意：

1. 根據(jù)以上內(nèi)容寫一篇短文，不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

2. 準(zhǔn)確使用語法和詞匯；使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表達(dá)自己的意思；

3. 詞數(shù)：100-120左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir,

I’m Bu Manyi , a Senior Three student in Xin Hua Middle School. I’m writing to complain about …

Yours,

Bu Manyi

Dear sir,

I am Pu ManYi. I am writing the letter to complain about my trip. During the holiday, I joined in a three-day trip organized by a travel agency. I had expected that I would have a wonderful experience. However, it turned out that the trip was a nightmare.

First, the bus we took was old and in bad condition. It was hot and crowded on the bus. When asking the driver to switch on the air-conditioner, we were told that it didn’t work. Still worse, it broke down halfway and it took several hours to repair it. After a long and tiring travel, we finally arrived at the destination, only to find that we were taken to a hotel with terrible service. The room was old, small and smelly. And the food tasted terrible. The guide also added to our unhappiness. When showing us around the attractions, the guide seemed to be more interested in persuading us to buy souvenirs, which were expensive and of bad quality.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇作文是一篇話題類作文。規(guī)定要點(diǎn)為四部分。需要注意：要合理添加內(nèi)容，每個(gè)要點(diǎn)都要涵蓋，注意語句的銜接。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。

【高分短語和句型】

1.it turn out that結(jié)果是，證明是。

2. in bad condition. 狀況不好

3. worse still更糟糕的是

4. 省略：When asking the driver to switch on the air-conditioner, we were told that it didn’t work.

5. 非謂語：After a long and tiring travel, we finally arrived at the destination, only to find that we were taken to a hotel with terrible service.

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