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【題目】進入高三以來，小明的學習成績不理想。父母為了幫助他學習，采取了陪讀的方式（accompany their kid studying）。他們給自己的孩子制訂了學習計劃，并每天檢查孩子的學習，督促他按時完成學習任務，陪孩子學習到深夜…

請以此寫一篇作文，內(nèi)容必須包括：

1.簡要描敘上述情景。

2.就上述關(guān)于父母陪讀的做法談談你的看法。

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Answer 1

【答案】Under the pressure of the test-oriented entrance examination of university, not only the students but also their parents are dedicated to studying. Xiao Ming, a senior three student, has underperformed for one or two months, which worried his parents. So they made a decision that they would accompany Xiao Ming studying. Their routine was to work out studying schedule, supervise and urge their senior 3 boy to complete learning tasks, and to be around him until deep night.

From my perspective, I’m not among the supporters that agree with the parents who tend to be totally involved in children’s study. Considerate as they seem, they may run counter to their desire. With parents accompanying, kids may suffer from a greater burden. Even worse, they are indifferent to such an unconditional love and feel reluctant to study in return. Thus, for parents, they should take the feeling of their child into consideration before taking any action. No matter how anxious the parents may be, they can’t be too cautious when they prepare to be a part of their kid’s study. Reversely, if their kids are desperate for the support from them, they ought to be the devoted parents rather than indifferent ones.

【解析】

本篇書面表達是開放性作文，要求就一種現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本文要求就父母陪讀的現(xiàn)象發(fā)表自己的看法：進入高三以來，小明的學習成績不理想。父母為了幫助他學習，采取了陪讀的方式。他們給自己的孩子制訂了學習計劃，并每天檢查孩子的學習，督促他按時完成學習任務，陪孩子學習到深夜。請以此寫一篇作文，內(nèi)容必須包括：1.簡要描敘上述情景。2.就上述關(guān)于父母陪讀的做法談談你的看法。時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如； accompany their kid studying（陪讀），the test-oriented entrance examination（應試入學考試），underperform（表現(xiàn)不佳），studying schedule（學習計劃）， supervise（監(jiān)督），urge（敦促），considerate(考慮周到的)，devoted（獻身的），cautious（謹慎的），unconditional（無條件的）及indifferent（不關(guān)心的）等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持卷面的整潔美觀。