Question

7．假如你是李華，你班同學(xué)Sandy得了心臟病需要做手術(shù)，但是由于她家境不好，付不起醫(yī)療費（medical fees），請你寫一份發(fā)言稿，號召同學(xué)們踴躍捐款．以下是寫作的內(nèi)容要點．
1．描述Sandy現(xiàn)在的具體情況．
2．呼吁大家奉獻愛心，盡力而為．
3．感謝大家的理解和幫助，世界因愛而溫暖．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；首句已給出．
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
 My dear classmates，I've got something to tell you．
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Answer 1

分析 本文屬于提綱作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮點句型一：Therefore，I hope that everybody can give her a hand and donate some money so that she can pick up her health again．因此，我希望每個人都能幫她一把，捐出一些錢，這樣她就能重新恢復(fù)健康．本句中"that everybody can…h(huán)er health again"引導(dǎo)的是賓語從句，在賓語從句中so that she can pick up her health again引導(dǎo)的引導(dǎo)的是目的狀語從句．
亮點句型二：What matters is that we are doing all we can to help our classmate．重要的是我們正在盡我們所能幫助我們的同學(xué)．本句中 that we are doing all we can to help our classmate引導(dǎo)的是表語從句，在這個表語從句中we can to help our classmate是一個定于從句修飾先行詞all，省略了關(guān)系代詞that．

解答 My dear classmates，I've got something to tell you．Unfortunately，Sandy，one of our classmates，is now suffering from a serious heart disease．As a result，she is in need of receiving an operation as soon as possible．However，her family is too poor to afford the medical fees．Therefore，I hope that everybody can give her a hand and donate some money so that she can pick up her health again．（亮點句型一）It doesn't matter how much you donate．What matters is that we are doing all we can to help our classmate．（亮點句型二）Thank you first for your understanding and help．Our world is warm because of the love in our heart and our class is like a big family since we love and care about each other．Thank you!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．