Question

【題目】一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)站面向中學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你寫一篇英文稿件，介紹“清明節(jié)（the Qingming Festival）”及這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。

寫作要點(diǎn)：

1. 它是中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；已有2500多年歷史，每年陽歷4月4-6日的一天。

2. 掃墓（do tomb-sweeping）祭祖；尋根認(rèn)祖；

3. 春游踏青，植樹，放風(fēng)箏等活動(dòng)；

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使用文連貫。

The Qingming Festival

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Answer 1

【答案】The Qing Ming Festival

The Qingming Festival, also known as Tomb-Sweeping Day, is a traditional Chinese festival, falling around April 4-6 each year. With a history of over 2,500 years, not only is it a seasonal point to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration.

As a most important day of sacrifice, the Qingming Festival sees a combination of sadness and happiness. On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowds with people who came to do tomb-sweeping and offer sacrifices in memory of the ancestors. In contrast to the sadness of the tomb sweeps, people also enjoy hope of Spring on this day. It is a time when people go on family outings, planting trees, singing and dancing. Another popular thing to do is to fly kites in the shapes of animals of characters from Chinese opera.

Seen as a lime to trace our roots and know who we are, the Qingming Festival is an occasion of unique characteristics, integrating sorrowful tears to honor the deceased with the continuous laughter from the spring outing.

【解析】試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)要求介紹清明節(jié)（the Qingming Festival）以及在這個(gè)節(jié)日里的主要活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)較多，在寫作時(shí)注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)還需要對(duì)要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行細(xì)節(jié)上的補(bǔ)充，以使文章內(nèi)容豐富，上下銜接。其次，因?yàn)槭菍?duì)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日、風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣的介紹，所以在時(shí)態(tài)選擇上要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。此外，本文屬于說明文范疇，要注意語言簡練、用詞準(zhǔn)確。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，要點(diǎn)全面。文中運(yùn)用了大量的短語，比如be known as；not only；in memory of；In contrast to等。還運(yùn)用了一些高級(jí)句法，如The Qingming Festival, also known as Tomb-Sweeping Day, is a traditional Chinese festival, falling around April 4-6 each year.和Seen as a lime to trace our roots and know who we are, the Qingming Festival is an occasion of unique characteristics, integrating sorrowful tears to honor the deceased with the continuous laughter from the spring outing.這兩句話運(yùn)用了非謂語動(dòng)詞作狀語，With a history of over 2,500 years, not only is it a seasonal point to guide farm work, it is more a festival of commemoration.這句話運(yùn)用了倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)，On each Qingming Festival, all cemeteries are crowds with people who came to do tomb-sweeping and offer sacrifices in memory of the ancestors.和It is a time when people go on family outings, planting trees, singing and dancing這兩句話運(yùn)用了定語從句。最后，文章注意了語句的銜接，如as；and等連接詞起到很好的連接上下文的作用，使文章讀起來自然流暢，朗朗上口。