Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是高二學(xué)生李明，最近你們年級(jí)要舉行一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，主題為：what’s the best way to travel?”。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下列提示寫一篇演講稿，談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?/span>

要點(diǎn)提示：

1. 火車旅行安全、舒服、環(huán)保、經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)惠，適合家庭旅行乘坐

2. 火車不會(huì)讓人有時(shí)差反應(yīng)，乘客可以自由走動(dòng)，也可以更好地欣賞沿途景色

注意：

1. 恰當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文流暢；

2. 詞數(shù)120左右

3. 作文中不能提及真實(shí)的學(xué)校及本人姓名

Answer 1

【答案】

The train is the easiest and most eco-friendly way to get around in the world. Trains allow you to travel in safety and comfort. They pollute less, rarely suffer from weather delays and you can talk to your companions, read a book, have a meal in the dining car, make friends in the bar. Instead of flying over the sights or being stressed while driving, trains provide you with a more pleasant view along the way.

In addition, passengers are allowed to move around from one carriage to another on a train. The ability to move around certainly makes the length of trips more bearable. Cell phones are also permitted.

What’s more, trains are very cheap compared to other means of transport. It may also be an economic choice, especially for families with children, who are usually fascinated by trains .

【解析】

試題分析：文章是一篇提綱類作文，主要就是講述了乘坐火車旅行的優(yōu)點(diǎn)。如：安全、舒服、環(huán)保、經(jīng)濟(jì)實(shí)惠，適合家庭旅行乘坐以及不會(huì)讓人有時(shí)差反應(yīng)，乘客可以自由走動(dòng)，也可以更好地欣賞沿途景色。除給出的要點(diǎn)外，還要求考生適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。需要注意的是必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，不要逐句翻譯。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文要點(diǎn)齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。使用了多種句式，如定語(yǔ)從句：especially for families with children, who are usually fascinated by trains。除此之外，還使用了許多短語(yǔ)，如：get around、suffer from、instead of、in addition、what’s more等等。