Question

假如你是學(xué)生李華，想作為一名交換生去馬恩島參觀學(xué)習(xí)，請(qǐng)你向國(guó)際交流部劉老師寫一封申請(qǐng)函，信的內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn)：
1． 你想?yún)⒓哟舜位顒?dòng)的原因；
2． 你的基本情況介紹（年齡，性別，愛好和特長(zhǎng)等）；
3.  ................（任何涉及學(xué)習(xí)方面的要點(diǎn)均被接受）。
注意：
1．信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)為你寫好；
2．字?jǐn)?shù)：不少于120。
Dear Mr. Liu，
I want to apply for the chance to go to the Isle of Man for cultural exchange. The reason is that…
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Many thanks!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Liu,
I want to apply for the chance to go to the Isle of Man for cultural exchange. The reason is that I want badly to get a thorough understanding of the British culture and this journey abroad will no doubt broaden my horizon as well as improve my oral English greatly. And below is my self-introduction.
I’m a girl of seventeen. Like many girls of this age, I enjoy making friends with whoever has common interests with me. Going shopping and surfing the Internet are what I often do at weekends. I also love music and I can play the piano fairly well. Of all the subjects I like English best because it is as beautiful a language as my mother tongue. Besides, I hold the belief that a good mastery of English will benefit my future.
I would appreciate it if you can give me such a chance. I am looking forward to your early reply!
Many thanks!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查半開放性作文寫作。本文首先要說明自己這樣做的理由，即想提高自己的應(yīng)用于，拓寬自己的眼界，更多理解不同的文化等等。自己的情況介紹可以從自身實(shí)際出發(fā)進(jìn)行描述。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。