Question

假設(shè)你是李華，Smith是你的英國網(wǎng)友。他對(duì)目前中國出現(xiàn)的霧霾天氣很關(guān)注，來信向你詢問此事，請(qǐng)你給他寫封回信。主要內(nèi)容如下：
1. 感謝他的關(guān)注；
2. 簡(jiǎn)介霧霾天氣給人們的身體、生活帶來的危害；
3. 談?wù)勀愕母邢搿?br />注意：1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫流暢；
2. 開頭與結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 詞數(shù)：100—120。 參考詞匯：smog霧霾
Dear Smith,
I’m very glad to hear from you. _______________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m very glad to hear from you. From your letter I learn that you are concerned about the smog which frequently appears in some areas of China. Thank you for your concern. I’m also very worried about such terrible weather because it has caused much inconvenience or great harm to people’s health, such as traffic jam, road accidents, bad coughs, throat hurts and even lung cancers and so on.
As everyone knows, a good environment comes from good protection. So we should do what we can to make a difference. Try to drive less and choose environment-friendly products. Only when everyone has the environmental awareness, can we have cleaner air.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon and share your good ideas!
Yours,
Li Hua

試題分析：考查半開放性作文。本文的話題是中國的霧霾。霧霾可以給有呼吸道疾病的人帶來生命危險(xiǎn)，引起咳嗽，肺癌等。對(duì)交通也有很大的影響，能見度低，導(dǎo)致交通事故。在個(gè)人感想方面可以從提高人民對(duì)于環(huán)境保護(hù)的意識(shí)，多使用健康環(huán)保的產(chǎn)品等方面詳細(xì)展開。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。