假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文，文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線劃掉；

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及修改均僅限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

In the summer holiday, we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle there. It’s a long and bored journey. But the moment I arrived, I fall in love with the city. It’s such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it. The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue. If you walk along the coast, you can feel the wind to blowing on your face. The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship. You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted. Moreover, I think the driver there drive too fast in the street. You can never be too careless when crossing the street.

1.第一句：visit前加上a

2.第二句：bored改成 boring

3.第三句：fall改成fell

4.第四句：such改成so

5.第五句：cleaning改成 clean

6.第六句：去掉to

7.第八句：far 改成 long

8.第九句：Moreover 改成 However

9.第九句：driver 改成 drivers

10.第十句：careless 改成 careful

【解析】

試題分析：

1. 考查冠詞。參觀某地：pay a visit to someplace 分析語境可知沒有特指某次參觀，故在visit前加上不定冠詞a.

2. boring 考查形容詞。bored:感到厭煩的，感到無聊的 boring:令人無聊的，令人厭煩的 a boring journey:一場令人無聊的旅途 故將bored改成 boring.

3. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。分析全文可知為一般過去時(shí)，故將fall改成fell.

4. 考查so的用法。短語“一個(gè)如此漂亮的城市”正確形式為“so beautiful a city”或者“such a beautiful city”.故將such改成so.

5. clean 考查形容詞。clean: adj. 干凈的，清澈的 cleaning: clean(v.)的現(xiàn)在分詞形式。根據(jù)語境可知“街道很干凈”，故將cleaning改成 clean.

6. 考查現(xiàn)在分詞做賓語補(bǔ)足語。根據(jù)語境可知“你可以感覺到風(fēng)吹在你的臉上”，分析可知wind和blow之間為主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式。故將to去掉.

7. 改成 long 考查as long as結(jié)構(gòu)。分析語境“只要允許，你還可以垂釣”，可知as far as：像...一樣遠(yuǎn) as long as：像...一樣長；只要(同so long as) 故將far改成long.

8. 改成 However 考查連詞。分析語境可知前文作者贊嘆城市的天空，微風(fēng)，干凈的街道等等，和后文“我認(rèn)為司機(jī)在路上開車太快了”形成對(duì)比，所以作者此處的語氣是轉(zhuǎn)折。Moreover：此外，而且，再者 However：然而 故將Moreover 改成 However.

9. 改成 drivers 考查單復(fù)數(shù)。分析語境可知“我認(rèn)為那兒的司機(jī)開車都太快了”，driver為可數(shù)名詞，在這里不可能是指某一個(gè)司機(jī)開車快，而是那里所有的司機(jī)都開車快。故將driver 改成 drivers.

10. 改成 careful 考查形容詞。分析語境可知“當(dāng)你過馬路的時(shí)候再小心也不為過”，careless: 粗心的 careful: 細(xì)心的，小心的 故將careless 改成 careful.

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