18．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
  增加：把缺詞處加一個(gè)漏符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
  刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
  修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
      注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
       2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
Hi Susan，
       I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to your bike on time yesterday．I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back．Just before I turned corner of Park Street，I happened to seeing an accident．A little girl was hurt and his mother needed help．So I helped them going to the nearest hospital．I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was safely．When I got back，it was already 6 p．m．I hope you understand．
      Thank you!Yours，
                                                             Li ling．

分析 Li ling寫(xiě)信給Susan告訴她不能及時(shí)歸還自行車(chē)的原因是因?yàn)樵诼飞嫌龅搅艘粋�(gè)車(chē)禍，Li ling幫助一位媽媽把受傷的女孩送到了醫(yī)院，并在那里呆了一段時(shí)間，確保小女孩沒(méi)事才離開(kāi)．

解答 Hi Susan，
       I'm sorry that I wasn't able to return to your bike on time yesterday．I mean to give it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back．Just before I turned∧corner of Park Street，I happened to seeing an accident．A little girl was hurt and his mother needed help．So I helped them going to the nearest hospital．I stayed here for one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was safely．When I got back，it was already 6 p．m．I hope you understand．
      Thank you!Yours，
                                                             Li ling．
詳解：
1．去掉to； 考查動(dòng)詞，return當(dāng)"歸還講"是及物動(dòng)詞，后面可直接跟賓語(yǔ)．
2．mean改為meant；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，此處要講的動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去，故用一般過(guò)去時(shí)meant．
3．a(chǎn)nd改為but； 連詞使用錯(cuò)誤，通過(guò)句子意思可以判斷
4．seeing改為see；考查動(dòng)詞，happen to do是固定搭配，意為"碰巧做某事"．
5．corner前面加the； 考查定冠詞，后面有介詞短語(yǔ)of Park Street限制，所以用the表示特指．
6．his改為her；考查形容詞性物主代詞，此處物主代詞應(yīng)與句子的主語(yǔ)A little girl 保持一致，故用her．
7．going改為go；考查動(dòng)詞，help sb （to） do sth是固定搭配，意為"幫助某人做某事"．
8．here改為there；考查副詞，通過(guò)句意"我在那里呆了一個(gè)半小時(shí)"可知要用副詞there．
9．hour改為hours； 考查名詞，一個(gè)半小時(shí)，要用復(fù)數(shù)形式hours．
10．safely改為safe； 考查形容詞，此處用形容詞safe做系動(dòng)詞was的表語(yǔ)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 整體理解短文，充分運(yùn)用所學(xué)的基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)，包括一些實(shí)詞和虛詞的用法，固定短語(yǔ)搭配，習(xí)慣性用法，結(jié)合上下文整體關(guān)系，找出錯(cuò)誤并加以修正

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