Question

1．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉．修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
Many children have access to online games or chatting．Teachers and parents are against children play games too often．Some parents even don't allow their children touch computers．Are computers so bad for children？I don't agree complete．There is no doubt that spending too much time playing games have a bad effect on children's health and learning．However，just like the saying goes，every coin has two sides．Computers have advantages if they are being used correctly．For example，we can surf the Internet for needy informations．Besides，we can send  emails instead of write letters or telephoning when we keep in touch with our family，relatives or friends．What's more，online games or chatting are forms of relaxing us．The most important thing is to lead children to controlling themselves．

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分析 本文探討了孩子接觸網(wǎng)絡(luò)到底是不是一件壞的事情？并發(fā)表了自己的看法．

解答 Many children have access to online games or chatting．Teachers and parents are against children play games too often．Some parents even don't allow their children touch computers．Are computers so bad for children？I don't agree complete．There is no doubt that spending too much time playing games have a bad effect on children's health and learning．However，just like the saying goes，every coin has two sides．Computers have advantages if they are being used correctly．For example，we can surf the Internet for needy informations．Besides，we can send  emails instead of write letters or telephoning when we keep in touch with our family，relatives or friends．What's more，online games or chatting are forms of relaxing us． The most important thing is to lead children to controlingthemselves．
詳解：
1．Play改為playing，考察動(dòng)名詞． 此句考察介詞against為反對(duì)的意思，后需接動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)．
2．touch 前加to，考察介詞．a(chǎn)llow sb to do sth 固定短語(yǔ)意為容許某人做某事．
3．complete改為 completely，考察副詞．修飾動(dòng)詞agree需用副詞形式．
4．have改為 has，考察謂語(yǔ)．該句的主語(yǔ)為spending…是一個(gè)動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞需用單數(shù)．
5．like 改為as，考察連接詞．the saying goes為一個(gè)句子，索引需用連詞as引導(dǎo)，like為介詞不符合．
6．去掉being，根據(jù)句意沒(méi)有正在被動(dòng)的意思，所以不需用現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)．
7．informations改為 information，考察名詞單復(fù)數(shù)．information為不可數(shù)名詞，所以不能加s．
8．write 改為writing，考察動(dòng)名詞．of為介詞，后需接動(dòng)名詞做賓語(yǔ)．
9．us 改為ourselves，考察人稱代詞．根據(jù)句意可知，打游戲和網(wǎng)聊可以使我們自己得到方式，所以需用oueselves反身代詞．
10．controlling 改為control 考察非謂語(yǔ)． lead sb to do sth為固定短語(yǔ)意為促使某人做某事．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)主要考察學(xué)生將所學(xué)的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)運(yùn)用在具體語(yǔ)境中的能力，在平時(shí)學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)需對(duì)一些基本的語(yǔ)法知識(shí)掌握．