Question

假如你是李華，是你校愛心俱樂部（the Loving Heart Club）的成員。最近，你校學(xué)生會擬招聘五名英語志愿者教師，你對此很感興趣。現(xiàn)請你根據(jù)以下要點提示，用英語寫一封申請信，向?qū)W生會申請這份工作。
1. 寫信目的；
2. 自我簡介；
3. 你的競聘優(yōu)勢；
4. 你對這份工作的認識。
注意：
1. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、地名等信息；
2. 詞數(shù)：100左右（書信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）。
Dear the Students’ Union,
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
                                                                                           
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear the Students’ Union,
I have learnt that you need five volunteer English teachers. I’d like to be one of them, so I’m writing to apply for the job.
My name is Li Hua, a member of the Loving Heart Club in our school, and I have a good command of English. I think I’m fit for the job well, because I have worked as an English tutor before, which will help me do the job better.
As far as I’m concerned, being a volunteer teacher is helpful to improve my understanding of the world. Besides, by helping others, I can make a small contribution to society.
I’d appreciate it if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua

試題分析：題目要求用英語寫一封申請信，申請成為一名英語志愿者老師。是常見的書信作文，寫作的要點已經(jīng)給出，按要求從寫信目的，自我介紹與自我優(yōu)勢，對工作的認識等方面著手。用第一人稱進行寫作，對自己的評價盡量客觀。注意書信的格式，標點和書寫規(guī)范。
【亮點說明】范文注意使用As far as I’m concerned, Besides,來銜接段意和句意，做到了語意連貫。范文使用了一些重點語法知識，如：賓語從句that you need five volunteer English teachers，原因狀語從句because I have worked...，非限制性定語從句which will help me do the job better，固定句型I’d appreciate it if...，動名詞作主語being a volunteer teacher is...等；語法功底較扎實。范文還使用了較多的短語I’d like to, apply for, have a good command of, be fit for, As far as I’m concerned, by helping others, make a contribution to, look forward to等，使作文顯得充實，有內(nèi)涵。