Question

【題目】假如你叫李華，你的美國網(wǎng)友Jack在上周給你的電子郵件中，希望你能為他介紹一下中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)（The Dragon Boat Festival）。請你根據(jù)下面的提示給他回一封郵件。

1.慶祝時間；

2.慶祝方式：包粽子，吃粽子；觀看龍舟賽（在南方流行）；

3.目的和重要性。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100詞左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：粽子rice dumplings/Zongzi 自盡commit suicide 竹葉bamboo leaf

Dear Jack,

Glad to hear from you and I would like to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival in China.

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Best wishes to you!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack,

Glad to hear from you and I would like to tell you something about the Dragon Boat Festival in China.

The Dragon Boat Festival, one of the most important traditional festivals in China, is celebrated on the fifth day of the fifth month according to the Chinese Lunar Calendar. On that day Chinese people usually eat rice dumplings, which are made of rice, meat and so on, wrapped in bamboo leaves. And there are different kinds of delicious rice dumplings. The festival is also known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes, and people watch dragon-boat races to celebrate it. Chinese people celebrate the festival in honor of Qu Yuan, who was an honest minister and a great poet in ancient times. It is said that he committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.

I hope the information is helpful and welcome to China to take part in the activities in person.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一篇電子郵件，同時也屬于提綱類作文，話題是介紹一下中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日——端午節(jié)（The Dragon Boat Festival）。要點都已經(jīng)給出，有分析現(xiàn)狀和原因，給出建議，審題時注意本文使用一般現(xiàn)在時，適當(dāng)?shù)脑黾蛹毠?jié)，使文章更充實，運用合適的語法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點都準確表述出來難點在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運用省略句，倒裝句和強調(diào)句型準確表述。提綱類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。同時注意謀篇布局的順序，運用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時選擇高級的詞匯和語法項目讓文章更有文采。

【亮點說明】

本文是一篇電子郵件，要點齊全，結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理，文中使用高級句子。On that day Chinese people usually eat rice dumplings, which are made of rice, meat and so on, wrapped in bamboo leaves.which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；The festival is also known for its dragon-boat races, especially in the southern places where there are many rivers and lakes,where引導(dǎo)定語從句；Chinese people celebrate the festival in honor of Qu Yuan, who was an honest minister and a great poet in ancient times.who引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；It is said that he committed suicide by drowning himself in a river.主語從句的固定句式。