Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文, 然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

High school students in Victoria, Australia have been offered Education Department advice ahead of their written exams. The advice has been developed by the state Education Department together with a mental health organization. “Exams can be a stressful time and the government is ensuring that students have the support they need to get through the period,” Education Minister Martin Dixon said.

Students are advised to breathe deeply through their noses as a relaxation technique, to have a healthy diet, and to improve their mood by exercising. The importance of sleep, staying connected with family and friends, and planned study times are emphasized. Students will also learn “positive self-talk”. “The positive way that you talk to yourself can be used for greater confidence and reducing stress, and can be a very effective way to prepare yourself for a big test or exam,” students are told.

The tips encourage young people to speak up if they are having difficulty, and remember that life will go on beyond exams. At the same time, students with serious problems are urged to seek professional help.

寫作內(nèi)容:1.用約30個(gè)單詞寫出上文概要；

2.用約120個(gè)單詞對(duì)文中所述話題進(jìn)行討論, 內(nèi)容包括：

3.你學(xué)習(xí)或生活中面對(duì)怎樣的壓力；

4.你正在或打算如何應(yīng)對(duì)這些壓力。

寫作要求:

1.作文中可以使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事, 也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容, 但不得 直接引用原文中的句子；

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱；

3.不必寫標(biāo)題。

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version:

Local authourities in Victoria, Australia have provided their students with practical advice in a bid to help them to better handle the stress from the approaching exams.

We can run into stress in our life on various occasions. As for me, maths used to cause a lot of trouble, and has long been a headache. Despite the large amount of effort and time I devoted, I just kept messing up in almost all the exams. It was so painful and depressing that I even started to believe maths was my thing.

Thanks to my parents and my maths teacher, whose support and advice have increased my confidence over the past several months. I have worked out a detailed plan to help manage my time and have tried to adopt useful learning strategies. Hopefully, with consistent efforts in class and regular revision at home, I will catch up and make steady progress.

【解析】 本文是應(yīng)用文，要求學(xué)生怎樣應(yīng)對(duì)壓力談自己的看法，故應(yīng)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第一人稱。

文章使用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)兼有靈活使用連詞等，且使用得當(dāng)，足見作者語言功底。文中使用了whose引導(dǎo)的定語從句，to help…不定式短語作定語，devoted過去分詞作定語等；高級(jí)短語暗示for，catch up，in a bid to等；還使用了hopefully等插入語的靈活運(yùn)用等讓文章一氣呵成，堪稱佳作。