Question

11．假設你是李華，得知肖偉在跟他的父母相處的過程中遇到一些困惑．請你根據(jù)下列信息寫信給他，并提供一些建議．

Xiao Wei's problems with his parents	not get along well with parents； forbid him from playing computer games； have no time to be alone …
Li Hua's advice	…

要求：1．必須包括所有信息；至少寫3條建議；
      2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總字數(shù)．
Dear Xiao Wei，
                                                                             
Best regards．
Yours truly．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應用文中常見的書信．話題是父母相處的過程中遇到一些困惑，有很強的可寫性，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，但只是一個提綱，考生還需要做適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮．在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次．同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second，Besides，What's more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢．本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔的表達自己的觀點．
【亮點說明】重點短語：have difficulty getting along well with，feel very angry about，have a good talk with，In this way，work hard at give up．句型：you can explain how you feel． 這句話有賓語從句，You should listen to them as they love you most．這句話有原因狀語從句，It is true that you need time to be alone． 這句話用了it做形式主語，However，you should make an effort to do what your parents ask． 這句話也是賓語從句，Both being a teenager and being a parent can be very difficult． 這句話用了動名詞做主語，Communicate with them more and you can find many problems can be solved． 這句話用了固定句型：祈使句+and/or+簡單句．

解答 Dear Xiao Wei，
     I'm sorry to hear that you have difficulty getting along well with your parents．（高分句型一）Don't worry．It is a common problem．You say that your parents do not listen to you．You feel very angry about this．I think you'd better have a good talk with them．In this way you can explain how you feel．You should listen to them as they love you most．（高分句型二） It is true that you need time to be alone．However you should make an effort to do what your parents ask．（高分句型三）And of course you must work hard at your study．Your study is important to your future．Both being a teenager and being a parent can be very difficult．However don't give up．Communicate with them more and you can find many problems can be solved．
     Best regards．
                                                                                                                                                                                                             Yours truly
                                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．