Question

【題目】你是高三學生李華，與美國的Bob是網友。請你給Bob寫封信，介紹自己希望在高考之后的假期實現(xiàn)的三個愿望，并詢問Bob的愿望和建議。

1. 實現(xiàn)大學夢，考上自己理想的大學；

2. 實現(xiàn)志愿者夢，到孤兒院做義工；

3. 實現(xiàn)旅游夢，體驗蒙古草原上的生活。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)120左右；

2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加情節(jié)。

3. 參考詞匯：孤兒院：orphanage；蒙古草原：Mongolia grassland

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob,

I haven’t written to you for a long time. This time I’d like to share with you the wishes I want to realize in the holiday after the entrance examination.

To begin with, as a student, I have been working hard in senior high school for three years, and I do hope I will succeed in being admitted into my ideal university to further my education. Also, I can spare more time to help children in the orphanage, which is helpful for my character building. Finally, the holiday provides me with a great opportunity to realize my dream to travel. Maybe experiencing life on the Mongolia grassland with people there will be a good choice to broaden my vision. Do you have some wishes to share with me and some advice for me?

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：本文要求考生以李華的身份給美國網友Bob寫信，介紹自己希望在高考之后的假期實現(xiàn)的三個愿望并詢問Bob的愿望和建議。所以文章使用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時的時態(tài)。要點如下：1. 實現(xiàn)大學夢，考上自己理想的大學；2. 實現(xiàn)志愿者夢，到孤兒院做義工；3. 實現(xiàn)旅游夢，體驗蒙古草原上的生活。建議文章分成兩部分，第一部分為導入內容，第二部分具體介紹自己的愿望。在寫作的時候盡量使用合適的連接詞連接上下文，并盡可能地使用高級句式提升文章層次。