Question

【題目】高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。體育課已成為難得的放松時間, 可目前你們體育課內(nèi)容單一，有時甚至被占用。請你用英語寫一篇短文，給校報投稿, 詞數(shù)不少于80，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1. 目前體育課的現(xiàn)狀

2. 你對此現(xiàn)象的看法

3. 提出一些合理的建議

Dear editor,

As the college entrance examination is drawing near,________________________________

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Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

As the college entrance examination is drawing near. We senior high school students are occupied with busy work. To a certain extent, PE class is our only chance to relax and enjoy ourselves at school. However, it is a pity that our present PE class is quite dull and sometimes even replaced by other subjects.

Not only can PE class build our body but also can shape our personality. It serves to develop our awareness of cooperation and spirit of competition. Therefore, personally I hold the view that it would be a great loss to us students if it were replaced by other lessons. Meanwhile, I think the teacher can design and organize some fun sports besides dull field and track practice or ball games, where everyone can be involved and have fun as well. After all, not everybody thinks running, jumping or ball games appealing.

I hope PE class can not only enrich our school life but also enable everyone to find his or her own pleasure in it.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，高三學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)任務(wù)繁重。體育課已成為難得的放松時間, 可目前你們體育課內(nèi)容單一，有時甚至被占用。請你用英語寫一篇短文，給校報投稿, 詞數(shù)不少于80，內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：

1. 目前體育課的現(xiàn)狀2. 你對此現(xiàn)象的看法3. 提出一些合理的建議。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱和第三人稱。要求寫約80個詞，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：are occupied with 、To a certain extent 、Not only引導(dǎo)的倒裝句、which 和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句、where引導(dǎo)的定語從句等都很不錯。