【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤， 每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加： 在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧), 并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除： 把多余的詞用斜線(xiàn)(\)劃掉。

修改： 在錯(cuò)的詞下畫(huà)一橫線(xiàn)， 并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意： 1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處， 多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

I have many friends, and Lily is one of the best. We have been playing together before we were young. She is such pretty girl that when people meet him, they always say, “Oh, how lovely”. Lily is also very brave. One evening two weeks ago, my mum sent me to buy some salt or sugar downstair. When I was back on the stairway, I sudden saw a black shadow behind me. I was frightening and cried. On that very moment, Lily came. She rushed to the shadow and shouts loudly until it disappeared. Then we ran to home safely.

【答案】1.before→since

2.pretty前面加a

3.him→her

4.or→and

5.downstair→downstairs

6.sudden→suddenly

7.frightening→frightened

8.On→At

9.shouts→shouted

10.去掉to

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章介紹了作者的一位好朋友Lily，并介紹了Lily幫助作者嚇退身后的黑影來(lái)保護(hù)作者的故事。

1、考查連詞。句意：我們從小就在一起玩。主句用現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)，從句表示自從我們年輕的時(shí)候以來(lái)。表示“自從……以來(lái)”，所以用連詞since引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。故將before改為since。

2、考查固定搭配。句意：她是一個(gè)如此漂亮的女孩，當(dāng)人們見(jiàn)到她時(shí)，他們總是說(shuō)，“哦，多么可愛(ài)”。such a/an+adj+n意為“如此……”，是固定搭配，“pretty”以輔音音素開(kāi)頭，故用冠詞a。故在pretty前填加a。

3、考查人稱(chēng)代詞。句意：她是一個(gè)如此漂亮的女孩，當(dāng)人們見(jiàn)到她時(shí)，他們總是說(shuō)，“哦，多么可愛(ài)”。此處指代Lily，根據(jù)前文可知，Lily是個(gè)女孩，所以用her作賓語(yǔ)。故將him改為her。

4、考查連詞。句意：我媽媽讓我到樓下買(mǎi)一些鹽和糖。salt，sugar是并列關(guān)系，不是選擇關(guān)系，故將or改為and。

5、考查副詞。句意：我媽媽讓我到樓下買(mǎi)一些鹽和糖。此處作地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)，應(yīng)用副詞形式downstairs。故將downstair改為downstairs。

6、考查副詞。句意：當(dāng)我回到樓梯上時(shí)，我突然看到一個(gè)黑影在我身后。此處用于修飾動(dòng)詞“saw”應(yīng)用副詞形式。故將sudden改為suddenly。

7、考查形容詞詞義辨析。句意：我嚇壞了，哭了起來(lái)。frightened受驚的，用于形容人；frightening令人恐懼的，用于形容物。此處形容作者受驚嚇，形容人，故將frightening 改為 frightened。

8、考查固定搭配。句意：就在這時(shí)，Lily來(lái)了。at that moment在那時(shí)，是固定搭配。故將On 改為 At。

9、考查時(shí)態(tài)。句意：她沖到影子那里，大聲喊叫，直到它消失。根據(jù)前后文可知，本文是描述過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情；且shout和前面的rushed并列作謂語(yǔ)，描述過(guò)去的事情，所以用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)。故將shout 改為 shouted。

10、考查介詞。句意：然后我們安全地跑回家。home為副詞，前面不加介詞。故to多余，應(yīng)去掉。

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