Question

【題目】書(shū)面表達(dá)

現(xiàn)今，大城市普遍存在著交通問(wèn)題。它不僅給人們的生活和工作帶來(lái)不便而且還威脅到了人們的生命安全。請(qǐng)以“Traffic Problems in Big Cities”為題，根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示完成作文：

1. 描述兩個(gè)常見(jiàn)的交通問(wèn)題；

2. 簡(jiǎn)要分析導(dǎo)致這些交通問(wèn)題的主要原因；

3. 根據(jù)你的分析，從社會(huì)規(guī)范(rules and regulations)和個(gè)人行為兩方面談談你得到的啟示(不少于兩點(diǎn))。

注意：1．詞數(shù)：120 左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Nowadays, traffic problems are common in big cities.

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Answer 1

【答案】

Nowadays, traffic problems exist widely in big cities. It not only causes a lot of inconvenience to people’s life and work, but it may also threaten people’s lives. For example, private cars often take up bus lanes, which becomes a main threat to the safety of cyclists. What’s worse, overloaded truck run a red light at a fast speed without hesitation, thus resulting in many serious traffic accidents.

In my view, quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track.

【解析】

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)大城市普遍存在著交通問(wèn)題不僅給人們的生活和工作帶來(lái)不便而且還威脅到了人們的生命安全，以“Traffic Problems in Big Cities”為主題寫(xiě)一篇短文。內(nèi)容包括：1.描述兩個(gè)常見(jiàn)的交通問(wèn)題；2.簡(jiǎn)要分析導(dǎo)致這些交通問(wèn)題的主要原因；3.根據(jù)你的分析，從社會(huì)規(guī)范(rules and regulations)和個(gè)人行為兩方面談談你得到的啟示(不少于兩點(diǎn))。

寫(xiě)作時(shí)，我們可以根據(jù)需要將這些信息進(jìn)行整理和安排，使文章的意思銜接更自然。文中所使用的詞匯和句型，是學(xué)生們比較熟悉的。當(dāng)然我們要盡量使用一些好的句型和連詞，使文章上下文意思連貫，更出彩。

寫(xiě)作亮點(diǎn)：這是一篇非常優(yōu)秀的作文，短文中作者按照題目的要求條理清楚，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，要點(diǎn)全面。而且作者在寫(xiě)作時(shí)，并不是完全按照題目中給出的順序，逐句翻譯的，而是將這些信息進(jìn)行了整合，讓意思關(guān)聯(lián)緊密的放在一起表達(dá)。短文中的語(yǔ)言合乎英語(yǔ)的表達(dá)規(guī)范，而且作者還使用了一些較好的詞匯和句式，增強(qiáng)了文章的連貫性。如定語(yǔ)從句which becomes a main threat to the safety of cyclists.、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞resulting in many serious traffic accidents.賓語(yǔ)從句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句It is the people who obey the rules that matter.；It 做形式主語(yǔ)。Inconvenience,without hesitation, In spite of, keep our society in order等詞匯和In my view, What’s worse, In fact, Without them連接詞等。