Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三一班的學(xué)生李華。你班同學(xué)參加了學(xué)校的＂地球日＂系列活動。請按照以下四幅圖的先后順序，以＂Actions for a Greener Earth＂為題，給�？�＂英語角＂寫一篇英文稿件，介紹活動的全過程。

注意：詞數(shù)不少于60。

提示詞：地球日 Earth Day

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Answer 1

【答案】A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth.

Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles, and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. That weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school.

【解析】這是一篇看圖作文。要求考生根據(jù)圖片介紹學(xué)校舉行的“地球日”活動。首先要仔細(xì)看圖，確定每幅圖的內(nèi)容。要注意按圖片順序介紹相關(guān)活動。其次，把每幅圖的主題找到，分別寫出每幅圖的主題句，即列出文章大綱。注意上下文的鏈接。整篇文章應(yīng)用過去時態(tài)。

【亮點(diǎn)分析】所給范文要點(diǎn)齊全，對每幅圖內(nèi)容進(jìn)行了準(zhǔn)確精煉的描述。條理清楚，長短句交叉使用。適當(dāng)使用一些高級詞匯和句式：1. 非謂語動詞：calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth。2. come up with；make use of；give away。