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【題目】高三學(xué)子要經(jīng)歷各種各樣的考試，在考試中難免會(huì)遇到失利，這給同學(xué)們造成了很大的困擾。針對考試失利問題的利與弊及應(yīng)對考試失利的做法，請用英語寫一篇短文。

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)120左右,開頭語已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Failure in Exams

As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failure sometimes, which greatly upsets them. Recently,

Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, Senior Three students will experience various exams and it is hard to avoid failure sometimes, which greatly upsets them. Recently, our class had a heated discussion about failure in exams. Here are the results.

We all agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam. Generally speaking, it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows. To begin with, it reminds students to devote themselves more to their studies. In addition, it helps students realize what aspects they are weak in, thus leading them to improve.

However, some advantages may arise form failure in exams. Firstly, it ruins students’ self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard. And secondly, teachers and parents show their dissatisfaction with these students, which makes the matter worse.

Faced with failure in exams, what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help. They will always analyze my problems and give me some advice on how to deal with them. Their comfort and encouragement mean so much to me.

【解析】

試題分析：該作文是命題作文。文章主題注意條理要清晰，邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng)，同時(shí)要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容，不拖泥帶水。要注意題中所給的信息，不可偏題，應(yīng)用文寫作對于文章內(nèi)容的要求是要達(dá)到寫作目的。盡量保持卷面整潔，字體美觀，注意行文的連貫性。使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次�！玖咙c(diǎn)說明】題目中所給的第一段不看，從第二段開始，首先用了一個(gè)賓語從句展開觀點(diǎn) We all agree that there are both advantages and disadvantages of failing in the exam. 我們一致認(rèn)為，考試失利既有著好處也有著壞處。第二句開頭用了分詞做狀語， Generally speaking一般來說。還用了一個(gè)主語從句 it is widely believed that 廣泛認(rèn)為…第四句也是一個(gè)賓語從句what做realize的賓語it helps students realize what aspects they are weak in, thus leading them to improve. 它幫助學(xué)生們一直到他們的弱項(xiàng)在哪兒，然后引導(dǎo)他們進(jìn)步。第三段第二句是一個(gè)賓語從句it ruins students’ self-confidence so badly that some of them even no longer study hard.它嚴(yán)重的傷害了學(xué)生們的自信心，以至于有一些人再也不努力學(xué)習(xí)了。第三句是一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，which代指前面整個(gè)句子， teachers and parents show their dissatisfaction with these students, which makes the matter worse.老師和家長們對這些學(xué)生表達(dá)出自己的不滿，這讓情況更加糟糕了。第四段第一句Faced with failure in exams過去分詞做狀語，也用了一個(gè)主語從句what I usually do is to turn to my teachers for help我經(jīng)常做的就是向我的老師尋求幫助。范文除了使用了一些復(fù)雜的從句之外，還用了很多比較好的結(jié)構(gòu)連詞和短語。 Both of（兩者）都；To begin with,開始；In addition,此外；However然而；arise form引起；Firstly,…secondly第一點(diǎn)…第二點(diǎn)；Faced with面對。。give…advice on，就某事提出建議。