Question

李華因在學(xué)校使用手機(jī)被學(xué)校處分，他感到很困惑，寫信給你求助。請根據(jù)以下結(jié)構(gòu)提示給李華回信。開頭結(jié)尾已給出。所給要點(diǎn)必須寫到外，自己可以適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充相關(guān)細(xì)節(jié)。字?jǐn)?shù)：90----100。

Para 1: 手機(jī)的優(yōu)點(diǎn)：聯(lián)系方便

Para 2: 帶手機(jī)上學(xué)的問題：影響教學(xué)，花大量時間打手機(jī)有害學(xué)習(xí)和健康

Your letter reached me yesterday. You said in your letter that ___

 

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It’s right for school to prevent you from using cellphones in school.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

A possible version:

Your letter reached me yesterday. It said in your letter that you were punished for using cellphones, which puzzled you.

There is no doubt that cellphones can bring us much convenience. We can keep in touch with friends and families wherever they are. Besides, the cellphone is a way to fun.

However, there are some problems with using cellphones. The ring of phones can disturb teachers and students in the class. It has been proved that often using cellphones does harm to health. Another problem is that some students can spend too much time and money on cellphones and sending messages, which will result in bad results in study.

As a student, he should concentrate on study. It is right for school to prevent you from using cellphones.

【解析】本文是關(guān)于手機(jī)的優(yōu)缺點(diǎn)。要用一分為二的思想來敘述。既要肯定手機(jī)給我們帶來的好處，又要指出手機(jī)的弊端。最后可以發(fā)表自己對于學(xué)生使用手機(jī)的看法。

開頭可以先對問題有一個總的描述。

When it comes to ..., most people believe that ..., but other people regard ...as .... 

Some people contend that ... has proved to bring many advantages (disadvantages) 

People, who advocate that ..., have their sound reasons (grounds) 

Those who have already benefited from practicing it sing high praise of

To my point of view 。。。。。