Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

We can go as far as we think. The great minds, more often than not, think more and have more aggressive ideas of their life than ordinary people.

注意：

①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；

②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；

③文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱;

④詞數(shù)為120左右，如引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

What we think is our direction and a goal of advancement. It guides us and makes us know what we really want and where we go. Then we spare our efforts to take active steps to make our dreams come true.

For example, Thomas Edison had a dream. He dreamed of a lamp that could be operated by electricity, and began where he stood to put his dream into action. Despite more than ten thousand failures, he stood by that dream until he made it a physical reality! And today, his dream lights up the world at night.

We think. We choose. And as we think and choose, so are our lives formed. In the end, forming our own destiny is what ambition is about.

【解析】

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。本文討論的話題是夢(mèng)想和目標(biāo)的巨大作用。此類(lèi)文章考生首先要表明自己的立場(chǎng)，要舉例進(jìn)行詳細(xì)的說(shuō)明，要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語(yǔ)言來(lái)表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫(xiě)作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考查半開(kāi)放性作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語(yǔ)來(lái)提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。