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18．冬春交替，氣溫多變，很多人染上流感．為此，你班舉行了"預(yù)防疾病以及防止病毒傳播"為主題的班會．請根據(jù)下表內(nèi)容，談?wù)勵A(yù)防疾病以及防止病毒傳播的簡單方法，并闡述理由．

方法	1．勤洗手	2．少外出
理由	有效預(yù)防各種疾�。徊《绢w粒存在于桌面、電話和其他物體的表面并通過手傳播．	盡量少用公共交通工具，盡量少接觸流感患者，有癥狀者（高燒咳嗽肌肉酸痛等）及時就醫(yī)．

注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；  2．可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：顆粒病毒：virus particles
Hello，everybody！It's true that many people are infected with flu virus when the weather changes frequently．                                                              
Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 本篇作文寫作要點比較詳細(xì)，內(nèi)容比較清楚，但要求學(xué)生圍繞提示適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，拓展主題．寫作的難點是將所給的幾個要點合理地組成比較通順的短文，因此在明確表達(dá)要點后，要仔細(xì)組織語言，簡要地列出提綱，合理安排結(jié)構(gòu)．短文主題明確，能合理地根據(jù)提示組織文章的主體結(jié)構(gòu)，且妙用了一些結(jié)構(gòu)將語言點組織成了一篇邏輯嚴(yán)密的短文．文章語言地道、語法規(guī)范、行文流暢，層次清晰．（1）文章布局合理，結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)密．There is one easy way to…It's a surprisingly effective way to…the other simple way 讓文章結(jié)構(gòu)井然．（2）文中的主語從句（it's more likely that…），定語從句（who might be infected）以及狀語從句（If people have the flu…）也值得借鑒．
It's a surprisingly effective way to prevent all sorts of diseases，including the flu virus．（高分句型一）
However，it's more likely that virus particles can linger on tabletops，telephones and other surfaces and be transferred via fingers to the mouth and nose．（高分句型二）
Staying at home is the other simple way．It means staying away from other people who might be infected．（高分句型三）

解答 Hello，everybody！It's true that many people are infected with flu virus when the weather changes frequently．I'll tell you two easy ways to deal with it．
      There is one easy way to protect again infection----frequent hand washing．It's a surprisingly effective way to prevent all sorts of diseases，including the flu virus．（高分句型一）Influenza can spread in the way of coughs or sneezes．However，it's more likely that virus particles can linger on tabletops，telephones and other surfaces and be transferred via fingers to the mouth and nose．（高分句型二）
      Staying at home is the other simple way．It means staying away from other people who might be infected．（高分句型三）If people have the flu，they should avoid using public transportation．Anyone with flu-like symptoms such as a sudden fever，cough or muscle aches should see a doctor at once．
      Thank you!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．