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【題目】假設(shè)你是學(xué)校英語校刊“Speak0utyourmind”的編輯，最近收到一封署名李華的高三學(xué)生來信，信中抱怨：學(xué)校最近嚴(yán)格檢查晨讀的情況，要求學(xué)生必須大聲朗讀；該生認(rèn)為每位同學(xué)有自己的學(xué)習(xí)方式，早上時(shí)間寶貴，應(yīng)該采用適合自己的方式進(jìn)行學(xué)習(xí)，才能收到最佳效果;學(xué)校不應(yīng)該采取統(tǒng)一要求的方式。請(qǐng)你給這位同學(xué)回信,就此問題進(jìn)行疏導(dǎo)，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.肯定晨讀的重要性和意義

2.大聲朗讀的好處(如提高記憶效率:增加學(xué)習(xí)氛圍等,)

3.鼓勵(lì)該學(xué)生排除雜念,大聲朗讀,從現(xiàn)在做起。

Dear Li Hua,

I am sorry to know that you are upset about morning reading_______________________________________

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Yours sincerely,

Richard

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Li Hua

As an old saying goes an hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.Therefore you are supposed to attach much importance to it if you want to improve your efficiency of study during such critical time.

Reading aloud in the morning is definitely of great benefit to study.To start with reading to oneself aloud just like having an audio recording can improve one’s reading and listening by mixing the audile and visual methods. Besides reading aloud with other classmates may well contribute to the good learning atmosphere which will in turn lift up one’s spirits thus making one progress in study.

All in all what you should do right now is to focus on you study getting rid of all the distracting thoughts.Read aloud from onw on and you’re sure to achieve your amazing goal.

【解析】試題分析：試題為應(yīng)用文中的書信寫作，試題只給出寫作框架，并未給出所有的具體寫作細(xì)節(jié)，為半開放性寫作。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確，信的開頭已經(jīng)給出，但切要寫好信的結(jié)尾。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文要點(diǎn)如下：1.肯定晨讀的重要性和意義2.大聲朗讀的好處(如提高記憶效率:增加學(xué)習(xí)氛圍等,)3.鼓勵(lì)該學(xué)生排除雜念,大聲朗讀,從現(xiàn)在做起。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本文是一篇書信，采用三段式，格式正確，內(nèi)容齊全，布局合理，使用高級(jí)句子。 As an old saying goes an hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句；Therefore you are supposed to attach much importance to it if you want to improve your efficiency of study during such critical time.if引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句； Reading aloud in the morning is definitely of great benefit to study.動(dòng)名詞做主語；which will in turn lift up one’s spirits thus making one progress in study.which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，現(xiàn)在分詞做自然的結(jié)果狀語；All in all what you should do right now is to focus on you study getting rid of all the distracting thoughts.what引導(dǎo)主語從句；另外，Therefore，are supposed to attach，To start with Besides reading All in all的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。