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17．假定你是李華，你所在的城市將要舉辦2017年金磚會(huì)議，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封申請(qǐng)信．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．愛(ài)好英語(yǔ)，口語(yǔ)熟練，經(jīng)常與外國(guó)網(wǎng)友聊天；
2．性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于交流；
3．本地人，熟悉城市的歷史與文化；
4．個(gè)人表態(tài)（真誠(chéng)服務(wù)、保證滿意）并希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：2017金磚會(huì)議 2017BRICS Conference，網(wǎng)友 net-pal
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017BRICS Conference．As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你所在的城市將要舉辦2017年金磚會(huì)議，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請(qǐng)按要求用英文給組委會(huì)寫一封申請(qǐng)信．寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：愛(ài)好英語(yǔ)，口語(yǔ)熟練，經(jīng)常與外國(guó)網(wǎng)友聊天；性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于交流；本地人，熟悉城市的歷史與文化；個(gè)人表態(tài)（真誠(chéng)服務(wù)、保證滿意）并希望獲準(zhǔn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：be crazy about 對(duì)…著迷；For example例如；chat with與…交談；contributes to有助于；Besides另外；Above all最重要的是；spare no effort to不遺余力地去做；
For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）
Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）
And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017 BRICs Conference．
      As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours Sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．