Question

17．假定你是李華，你所在的城市將要舉辦2017年金磚會議，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信．內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：
1．愛好英語，口語熟練，經(jīng)常與外國網(wǎng)友聊天；
2．性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于交流；
3．本地人，熟悉城市的歷史與文化；
4．個人表態(tài)（真誠服務(wù)、保證滿意）并希望獲準(zhǔn)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：2017金磚會議 2017BRICS Conference，網(wǎng)友 net-pal
Dear Sir/Madam，
My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017BRICS Conference．As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
Looking forward to your reply．
Yours Sincerely
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華，你所在的城市將要舉辦2017年金磚會議，現(xiàn)在正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員．請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信．寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：愛好英語，口語熟練，經(jīng)常與外國網(wǎng)友聊天；性格開朗，思維敏捷，善于交流；本地人，熟悉城市的歷史與文化；個人表態(tài)（真誠服務(wù)、保證滿意）并希望獲準(zhǔn)．2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：be crazy about 對…著迷；For example例如；chat with與…交談；contributes to有助于；Besides另外；Above all最重要的是；spare no effort to不遺余力地去做；
For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）
Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）
And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir/Madam，
      My name is Li Hua．I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2017 BRICs Conference．
      As a senior high school student，I'm crazy about English and practice speaking English in everyday life．For example，I often chat with some foreign net-pals，which really contributes to my fluency in oral English．（高分句型一）Besides，I'm open-minded，quick in thought and fond of social practice，which I think is a quality that a qualified volunteer should have．（高分句型二）Above all，being a native of the city，I do know a lot about its history and cultur e．So I'm sure that the foreigners will appreciate my sincere service and enjoy their stay in our city．I would appreciate it if my application could be granted．And I'll spare no effort to ensure everyone's satisfaction．（高分句型三）
      Looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours Sincerely
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．