Question

【題目】閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容寫一篇60詞左右的內(nèi)容概要。

In a small village, the parents of a little boy were very depressed due to his bad temper(脾氣). The boy used to get angry very easily and hurt others with his words. While he forgot what he spoke in anger, his friends and neighbours avoided him.

His mother and father tried many ways to make him give up his anger and develop kindness. Unfortunately, all their attempts failed. Finally, the boy’s father came up with an idea.

One day, his father gave him a huge bag of nails, asking him to hammer one nail to the fence every time he lost his temper. The little boy found it funny and accepted what his father had said.

His anger drove him to hammer 30 nails into the fence on the first day! Over the next few days, the little boy found it very difficult to hammer the nails into the fence and decided to control his temper.

Gradually, the number of nails hammered into the fence was reduced and the day arrived when he hammered none!

Now, his father told him to remove the nails every day as he had controlled his anger. Several days passed and the boy was able to pull out most of the nails from the fence.

The father appreciated him and asked him, pointing to one of the holes, “What do you see there?”

The boy replied, “A hole in the fence?”

He told the boy, “The nails were your bad temper and they were hammered into people. You can remove the nails but still see the holes in the fence. The fence never looks the same! It has scars all over! Your bad temper and anger were like that! Use words for good. Use them to show your heart!”

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Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version:

One possible version:

There was a little bad-tempered boy in a small village（要點一）. To help him give up his anger, his father asked him to hammer a nail into a fence whenever he became angry （要點二）and remove one whenever he didn’t lose his temper（要點三）. Gradually, the boy could control his temper（要點四）. This story tells us just like holes in a fence, a bad temper and anger can hurt others forever（要點五）.

【解析】

試題分析：

本文要求對所給內(nèi)容寫一個概要，寫作時注意抓住重點主題句，把文章所表達(dá)的信息用簡潔的句子完整的表述。注意語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性，上下文的連貫并用自己的語言表達(dá)。

【亮點說明】

文章對原文要點的理解和呈現(xiàn)情況比較好，按照故事發(fā)展的順序展開，用幾個簡潔的句子把文章內(nèi)容表述的非常清晰完整。文章使用了很好的短語和句子給文章增色bad-tempered脾氣壞的；To help him give up his anger為了幫助他克服壞脾氣（不定式作狀語）；whenever he became angry無論何時他感到生氣時。