Question

11．近年來(lái)，各地媒體不斷推出各種選秀節(jié)目，電視選秀非常流行，同時(shí)不少年輕人，甚至高中生也參加了這類節(jié)目．請(qǐng)以"電視選秀節(jié)目（TV talent show）之利弊"為主題，用英文寫(xiě)一篇120個(gè)詞左右的短文．要點(diǎn)如下：
1、簡(jiǎn)述電視選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)狀；
2、你對(duì)選秀節(jié)目利弊的看法并說(shuō)明你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 本文為利弊型作文，要求對(duì)電視選秀節(jié)目進(jìn)行利弊分析，本文要點(diǎn)已給出但是要做適當(dāng)?shù)臄U(kuò)展，寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容包括：簡(jiǎn)述電視選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)狀，選秀節(jié)目的利弊，自己對(duì)電視選秀節(jié)目的看法，注意使用連接詞，使作文內(nèi)容連貫，注意寫(xiě)作的時(shí)態(tài)．時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，人稱用第三人稱．
重要短語(yǔ)：
come up with想出，
grow in向里長(zhǎng)
Meanwhile與此同時(shí)
attend these shows參加這些選秀
As far as I am concerned就自己而言
On the one hand一方面，On the other hand另一方面
Therefore因此
importance for one's對(duì)某人很重要
 
 高分句型：
1．With different media across China comingup with various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．
此句用了With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)．with+賓語(yǔ)+現(xiàn)在分詞（賓語(yǔ)與賓補(bǔ)之間是主動(dòng)關(guān)系）
　　如：Withwinter coming on，it's time tobuy warm clothes．
2．As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like adouble-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．
句中含有which引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句，which代替上文中所提到的TV talent show．
which指物，在定語(yǔ)從句中做主語(yǔ)或者賓語(yǔ)，做賓語(yǔ)時(shí)可省略
（1）Football is a game which is liked bymost boys．
（2）This is the pen （which） he boughtyesterday．

3．they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．
ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，作狀語(yǔ)分詞在意義上也可用作狀語(yǔ)，表示時(shí)間、原因、方式和伴隨情況等．
　Opening the drawer he took out a dictionary．他打開(kāi)抽屜，拿出一本詞典．（=He opened the drawer and took…這兩個(gè)動(dòng)作是一個(gè)接著一個(gè)）
  She stood there waiting for the bus．她站在那兒等公共汽車．（伴隨情況或方式）
No pains，no gains 譯為不勞不獲，此句為一句諺語(yǔ)．如：love me，love my dog譯為愛(ài)屋及烏

解答 With different media across China coming upwith various shows，TV talent show has grown in popularity in recent years．（高分句型）Meanwhile，it is not uncommon to see manyyoung people，even highschool students，attend theseshows．（電視選秀節(jié)目的現(xiàn)狀）
    As far as I am concerned，TV talent show is like a double-edged sword，which can do us both good and harm．（高分句型）On the one hand，these shows can provide preciousopportunities for the young to express themselves and to perform their talentsof singing，dancing andso on．On the otherhand，they may alsomislead the youth and make them believe that they can make easy money or becomefamous overnight，ignoring the fact of"No pains，no gains．"（高分句型）（我對(duì)電視選秀節(jié)目的看法）
    Therefore，it is of vital importance for us，especially young people and their parents，to think twice before attendingthem．（對(duì)此做出總結(jié)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 這是一篇所給材料比較詳細(xì)的利弊類作文，我們要做的就是把這些內(nèi)容用正確的英語(yǔ)表達(dá)出來(lái)，動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，同時(shí)要表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮，在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，固定詞組搭配，要注意語(yǔ)言的規(guī)范性，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系．