Question

【題目】假如你是某中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華，剛剛收到美國(guó)筆友Sarah發(fā)來的一封電子郵件，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她回復(fù)一封郵件，具體內(nèi)容包括：

1. 學(xué)習(xí)科目、作息時(shí)間；

2. 課余活動(dòng)（運(yùn)動(dòng)、閱讀、上網(wǎng)）;

3. 理想大學(xué)及選擇的原因。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：120詞左右；頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可以適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)以為你寫好。

Dear Sarah,

I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.

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Best regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sarah,

I’m very glad to receive your last e-mail. At your request, I’d like to tell you something about my school life.

This year I am Senior 3, and I have six subjects to learn every day. School hours usually begin at 7 am and end at 8:30 pm. We are making the most of every minute, preparing for the coming college entrance examination. Though time is precious, I try to do some sports or do some reading after class. Sometimes, too, I surf the Internet to update and amuse myself.

It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I went to senior high school because of its strong cultural atmosphere as well as its high academic status.

I’d appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well. I’m looking forward to it.

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查應(yīng)用文中的書信的寫作。請(qǐng)你以李華的名義給你的一位美國(guó)筆友Sarah寫一封回信，介紹一下目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況以及理想的大學(xué)。本篇習(xí)作要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出，書信類短文的關(guān)鍵在于要點(diǎn)要全面包括，不能有遺漏和省略。但是要點(diǎn)只是提綱，考生還要在此基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)，不要逐字逐句翻譯，同時(shí)注意謀篇布局的順序，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞連接全文，同時(shí)選擇高級(jí)的詞匯和語(yǔ)法項(xiàng)目讓文章更有文采。描述要盡量選擇簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言，運(yùn)用合適的語(yǔ)法規(guī)則和詞匯把各要點(diǎn)都準(zhǔn)確表述出。難點(diǎn)在于選擇詞匯和句型，可以靈活運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和固定短語(yǔ)準(zhǔn)確表述。除此之外，還要用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞把句子連接起來，這樣文章會(huì)顯得更連貫。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本篇文章要點(diǎn)齊全、結(jié)構(gòu)合理、條理清晰。使用了多種句式，如狀語(yǔ)從句：It’s been my dream to go to Peking University ever since I went to senior high school以及賓語(yǔ)從句：I’d appreciate it if you can tell me something about your school life as well.。還使用了許多短語(yǔ)如：make the most of every minute、prepare for、update and amuse myself、strong cultural atmosphere等等。