Question

有人認(rèn)為學(xué)生上網(wǎng)吧有益，有人認(rèn)為有害。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下表提供的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)一篇議論文發(fā)表在你校自辦的英語(yǔ)小報(bào)上。字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

觀點(diǎn)	論據(jù)
學(xué)生不宜過(guò)多上網(wǎng)	浪費(fèi)學(xué)習(xí)和休息時(shí)間
減少戶外活動(dòng)，有損身體健康
有些內(nèi)容不健康
學(xué)生上網(wǎng)有益	擴(kuò)大視野，學(xué)到很多課堂上學(xué)不到的
是一種娛樂(lè)，充實(shí)課余生活
能結(jié)交知心朋友

生詞：網(wǎng)吧——the Internet bar 擴(kuò)大——enlarge 娛樂(lè)——relaxation

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version:

Some people think students shouldn’t spend much time in the Internet bar. First, being on net a lot will waste time which should be spent on the study and rest. Second, students need enough outdoor sports while online will do harm to their health, especially to their eyesight. Third, some contents on-line are not suitable for the students.

But other people think being in the internet bar is useful to students. The reasons mainly lie in three facts. First it can enlarge their knowledge and they can learn a lot that can’t be learned in class. Second, being on-line is a kind of relaxation, and it can actually enrich students’ life out of class. Above all, students can make a lot of true friends on-line, from whom they can get advice on many things.

Best wishes!

Yours Sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】這是一片議論文的書(shū)面表達(dá)，圍繞學(xué)生上網(wǎng)吧是否有益，闡述正反兩方面觀點(diǎn)。考生在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要注意論點(diǎn)清晰及條理清楚。題目已給定大致的觀點(diǎn)，要注意漢譯英的正確性以及不要遺漏觀點(diǎn)。

本文采用了經(jīng)典的三段論式寫(xiě)法，第一段闡述反對(duì)方的意見(jiàn)，第二段闡述支持方意見(jiàn)，第三段收文。第一二段開(kāi)頭采用some people….the other people…..格式，清晰有條理，句式經(jīng)典簡(jiǎn)練。第一段用first…..second…..third…..敘述意見(jiàn)，使得行文十分流暢。第二句First, being on net a lot will waste time which should be spent on the study and rest用動(dòng)詞ing形式做主語(yǔ)，同時(shí)運(yùn)用了定語(yǔ)從句。第一段中運(yùn)用了especially等比較經(jīng)典的詞匯。第二段同樣用first…..second….但用above all總結(jié)注意了句式的靈活性，為文章增添了一大亮色。第二段結(jié)尾Above all, students can make a lot of true friends on-line, from whom they can get advice on many things.運(yùn)用了一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，同時(shí)出現(xiàn)了如 mainly，get advice on等很好地副詞及短語(yǔ)。

考點(diǎn)：考查議論文表達(dá)

總結(jié)：基本格式為some people think….(first…second….third)….

the other people think…..(注意句式的變化性以及銜接詞的靈活性)