【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The person who has taught me most about the life is my grandmother.When she died a few years before, I felt I lost a really good friend.She always looked very nice on her age.She did everything she could make me feel at home.She was imaginative but would spend hours telling me stories she has made up.I am sure it was because of her which I became a story writer.Apart from kept a young boy entertained, she taught me a large number of important thing on how to behave.I was rather impatient when I was a child and she taught me that good things happened if I could wait for it.

【答案】第一處：刪除most； 第二處：把before改為ago； 第三處：on改為for；

第四處：could后加to；第五處：but改為and 第六處：刪除has 第七處：which改為that

第八處：kept改為keeping 第九處：thing改為things 第十處：it改為them

【解析】

本文是一篇記敘文，奶奶是我的人生導(dǎo)師，她不僅照顧我，而且還教我做人的道理，正是因?yàn)樗挠绊懀也懦蔀榱艘幻骷摇?/span>

第一處：考查句意；句意：教我如何生活的人是我的奶奶。句中動詞短語teach sb about sth教育某人某事，句中的most是多余的。所以要刪除most。

第二處：考查副詞。句意：當(dāng)幾年前，她去世的時候，我感覺到失去了一個真正的好朋友。此處表示幾年以前，又與過去式連用，故用ago代替before。

第三處：考查介詞。句意：在她那個年齡，她看起來真得很好。在她那個年齡用for。所以要把on改為for。

第四處：考查不定式。句意：她做了她能做的一切讓我感覺在自己家里一樣。句中不定式to make me feel at home。句中不定式做目的狀語，所以要在could后面加to。

第五處：考查連詞。句意：她很有想象力，也常�；◣讉�小時給我講她編的故事。前后兩部分為順承關(guān)系，故用and。所以要把but改為and。

第六處：考查連詞。此處表示她編的故事，定語從句作后置定語。時態(tài)要與主句的 was一致。所以要刪除has。

第七處：考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句型。句意：我確信，正是因?yàn)樗也懦蔀橐粋�故事作家。本句考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句，強(qiáng)調(diào)介詞短語because of her，強(qiáng)調(diào)句型的基本結(jié)構(gòu)是it was...that。所以要把which改為that。

第八處：考查動名詞。句意：除了讓一個男孩開心之外，她還教了我很多做人的重要事情。介詞短語apart from之后要跟動名詞形式做賓語，故用keeping。所以要把kept改為keeping。

第九處：考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。句意：除了讓一個男孩開心之外，她還教了我很多做人的重要事情。許多重要的事情，故用things。所以要把thing改為things。

第十處：考查代詞。此處指代good things，故用them不用it，因?yàn)?/span>it指代上文出現(xiàn)的單數(shù)名詞。所以要把it改為them。

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