假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad. He always gives me some advice, but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition, I did my best to be full prepared. But the moment I stood on the stage, I was such nervous that my mind completely went blank. The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then, my dad said, “My son, life is like battlefield. You have to lose many time to win the final victory.” Thanks for his advice, I never give up when I do anything.

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科目：高中英語 來源：2016-2017學(xué)年廣東汕頭金山中學(xué)高二12月考試英語試卷（解析版） 題型：完形填空

When I was eight, I wrote my first poem. My mother read and cried, “Buddy, you didn't really write this beautiful poem!” Shyly, but _____, I said yes. She poured out her ____.“It was nothing short of talent!” “What time will Father be home?” I asked. I could _____ wait to show my work to him. I spent quite some time ____ for his arrival. I wrote the poem out in my finest flourish(花體字), drew a fancy border around it and ____ I placed it right on my father’s plate on the dining table. My father had begun his motion-picture career as a writer. I was sure he would be able to _____ my poem.

At almost 7 o’clock my father burst in. He seemed ____. He circled the dining-room table, complaining about his employees. _____ he paused and glared at his plate. “What is this?” He’s reaching for my poem. “Ben, Buddy has written his first poem!” my mother began. “And it’s beautiful, absolutely amaze...” “If you don’t mind, I’d like to decide for myself.” Father said. I ______ my head as he read that poem. It was only ten lines. But it seemed to take hours. Then I heard him dropping the poem back on the table. Now came the moment of ______. “I think it’s terrible,” he said. I couldn’t look up. My eyes were getting ______.

“Ben, these are the first lines of poetry he’s ever written,” my mother was saying. “He needs encouragement.” “I don’t know why.” My father held his ground. “Isn’t there enough _____ poetry in the world already?” I couldn’t ______it another second. I ran from the dining room crying. Up in my room I ______ myself on the bed and cried the worst of the disappointment out of me.

That may have been the end of the story, but not of its ______ for me. I realized how ____ I had been. I had a mother who said, “I think it’s wonderful!” and a father who drove me to hear with “I think it’s awful.” Every one of us needs that mother force, from which all creation flows; and yet the mother force alone is _____. It needs the balance of the force that _____, “Watch. Listen. Review. Improve.”

Those _______ voices of my childhood ring in my ears through the years, like two opposing winds blowing me. ______ the two poles of confirmation and doubt, both in the name of love, I try to follow my true course.

1.A. proudlyB. slowlyC. anxiouslyD. honestly

2.A. praiseB. surpriseC. criticismD. belief

3.A. seldomB. hardlyC. frequentlyD. instantly

4.A. waitingB. planningC. prayingD. preparing

5.A. embarrassedlyB. confidently

C. nervouslyD. casually

6.A. readB. reviseC. appreciateD. polish

7.A. allergicB. fragileC. tiredD. upset

8.A. ExcitedlyB. SuddenlyC. SurprisinglyD. Instantly

9.A. shookB. raisedC. turnedD. lowered

10.A. truthB. struggleC. discussionD. decision

11.A. wetB. wideC. darkD. blank

12.A. terribleB. elegantC. fluentD. inaccurate

13.A. stopB. seeC. standD. control

14.A. seatedB. threwC. stuckD. kept

15.A. difficultyB. developmentC. significanceD. challenge

16.A. enthusiasticB. fortunate

C. desperateD. ridiculous

17.A. incompleteB. contradictoryC. inappropriateD. constructive

18.A. ordersB. persuadesC. cautionsD. announces

19.A. conflictingB. warning

C. disturbingD. inspiring

20.A. InB. BetweenC. AmongD. For

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科目：高中英語 來源：2015-2016學(xué)年內(nèi)蒙古高一下期第二次月考英語卷（解析版） 題型：閱讀理解

Have you ever run into a careless cell phone user on the street? Perhaps they were busy talking, texting or checking updates on WeChat (微信) without looking at what was going on around them. As the number of this new “species” of human has kept rising, they have been given a new name — phubbers (低頭族).

Recently, a cartoon created by students from China Central Academy of Fine Arts put this group of people under the spotlight. In the short film, phubbers with various social identities bury themselves in their phones. A doctor plays with his cell phone while letting his patient die, a pretty woman takes selfie (自拍) in front of a car accident site, and a father loses his child without knowing about it while using his mobile phone. A chain of similar events eventually leads to the destruction of the world.

Although the ending sounds overstated, the damage phubbing can bring is real. Your health is the first to bear the effect and result of it. “Constantly bending your head to check your cell phone could damage your neck,” Guangming Daily quoted doctors as saying. “The neck is like a rope that breaks after long-term stretching.” Also, staring at cell phones for long periods of time will damage your eyesight gradually, according to the report.

But that’s not all. Being a phubber could also damage your social skills and drive you away from your friends and family. At reunions with family or friends, many people tend to stick to their cell phones while others are chatting happily with each other and this creates a strange atmosphere, Qilu Evening News reported.

It can also cost you your life. There have been lots of reports on phubbers who fell to their death, suffered accidents, and were robbed of their cell phones in broad daylight.

1.For what purpose does the author give the example of a cartoon in Para. 2?

A. To inform people of the bad effects of phubbing.

B. To advertise the cartoon made by students.

C. To indicate the world will finally be destroyed by phubbers.

D. To warn doctors against using cell phones while treating patients.

2.Which of the following is NOT a risk(危險(xiǎn)）a phubber may have?

A. His social skills could be affected.

B. His neck and eyesight will be gradually harmed.

C. He will cause the destruction of the world.

D. He might get separated from his friends and family.

3.Which of the following may be the author’s attitude towards phubbing?

A. Supportive.B. Opposed.C. Optimistic.D. Objective.

4.What may the passage talk about next?

A. Advice on how to use WeChat.

B. People addicted to phubbing.

C. Measures to reduce the risks(危害) of phubbing.

D. Results of phubbing.

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科目：高中英語 來源：2015-2016年黑龍江、吉林兩省六校高一上期中聯(lián)考英語卷（解析版） 題型：閱讀理解

The latest Chinese “god song”(an Internet term to describe pop songs that spread virally through the Internet(像病毒一樣傳播開來) is still making debates(爭(zhēng)論) between those who view it as a milestone for Chinese pop music going global and those who regard it as a bad image of China.

Last week, Little Apple, written and performed by the Chopsticks Brothers, won the AMA International Song Award and the duo performed the song at the 2014 American Music Awards in Los Angeles. Another Chinese pop singer, Zhang Jie, won the International Artist Award.

But while fans of these singers are thinking highly of the awards(獎(jiǎng)) and the performance by the Chopsticks Brothers at the AMA celebration, there are others who are less excited. They have questioned the value of the awards and what effect it will have on Chinese culture’s “going abroad”, saying it may leave foreign audiences with a poor impression(印象) of Chinese pop music, and even Chinese culture.

The Little Apple phenomenon, both home and abroad, can be more easily understood and judged if we look at it from a business view rather than a cultural view. The professional promoters behind the duo have developed a clear strategy(策略) to promote the duo and their works, not just this particular song. Little Apple was originally released(發(fā)行) to promote the duo’s film Old Boys: The Way of the Dragon.

From the very beginning a marketing strategy was used to promote(提升) the song, which immediately went viral on the Internet due to its repetitive rhythm(重復(fù)的韻律)，easy-to-remember lyrics(歌詞), simple and funny dance and, most importantly, grass roots (草根) nature. The video accumulated(積攢) more than 1 billion bits on China’s major video websites.

Although the song was generally disliked by music professionals who criticized(批評(píng)) it as “musical junk food”, Little Apple’s popularity nationally paved the way(為…鋪平道路) for promoting the duo internationally.

1.The writer’s attitude to the song of Little Apple is ________.

A. opposed(相反的)B. negative(消極的)

C. objective(客觀的)D. critical

2.What do the underlined words “the duo” refer to?

A. Little AppleB. Chopsticks Brother

C. Zhang JieD. American singers

3.We can learn from the passage that ________.

A. Little Apple’s popularity is also a success of marketing strategy

B. Little Apple is generally thought nothing by the AMA

C. Little Apple is really popular with all people in China

D. Little Apple was originally released as a pop play on the Internet

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科目：高中英語 來源：2017屆內(nèi)蒙古高三上第三次月考英語卷（解析版） 題型：閱讀理解

What's the most important thing in life?

People's answers vary greatly. For British scientist Robert Edwards, the answer is having a child. "Nothing is more special than a child," he told the BBC.

Edwards, the inventor of the In Vitro Fertilization (IVF) technology—more commonly known as "test-tube (試管) baby" technology—passed away on April 10, 2013 at the age of 87.

"Edwards changed the lives of millions of ordinary people who now rejoice (高興) in the gift of their own child," said Peter Braude, a professor at King's College London. "He leaves the world a much better place."

Edwards started his experiments as early as the 1950s, when he had just finished his PhD in genetics. At that time, much of the public viewed test-tube babies as "scary", according to Mark Sauer, a professor at Columbia University, US.

Edwards and his colleague Patrick Steptoe faced opposition from churches, governments and media, not to mention attacks from many of their fellow scientists. "People said that we should not play God and we should not interfere with nature," Edwards once told Times. He said that he felt "quite alone" at the time.

"But Edwards was a fighter, and he believed in what he was doing," said Sauer. Without support from the government, the two struggled to raise funds to carry on. And in 1968 they finally developed a method to successfully fertilize human eggs outside the body.

The first test-tube baby was born on July 25, 1978. Her name was Is Louise Brown. Despite people's safety concerns, Brown was just as healthy as other children.

"IVF had moved from vision to reality and a new era in medicine had begun," BBC commented.

Ever since then, public opinion has evolved considerably. Couples who were unable to have babies began thronging (擁向) to Edwards' clinic. Nowadays, Reuters reports, some 4.3 million other "test-tube" children exist. Edwards received a Nobel Prize in 2010 and was knighted (封為爵士) by Queen Elizabeth in the following year.

Before his death, Edwards was still in touch with Louise. "He is like a granddad to me," she said in an interview with the Daily Mail.

He is a granddad to millions, in fact.

1.What’s the article mainly about?

A. The first test-tube baby.

B. A new era in medicine.

C. The inventor of IVF technology.

D. The changes IVF technology has brought.

2.The writer mentioned Peter Braude to ________.

A. show how difficult it was for Edwards to do his work

B. describe what kind of person Edwards was

C. explain why he is loved by all children

D. comment on his achievement

3.The underlined word "opposition" in Paragraph 6 is closest in meaning to "________"

A. attackB. supportC. testD. influence

4.What is the correct order of events in Edwards' life?

a. He received a Nobel Prize.

b. He struggled to raise funds.

c. The first test-tube baby was born.

d. He was knighted by Queen Elizabeth II.

e. He succeeded in fertilizing human eggs outside body.

f. He started his experiments on IVF technology.

A. f-e-b-c-a- d B. f-b-e-c-d-a

C. f-b-e-c-a-d D. f-e-d-a-c-b

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科目：高中英語 來源：2017屆江西南昌二中高三上期第四次考試英語試卷（解析版） 題型：七選五

根據(jù)短文內(nèi)容，從短文后的選項(xiàng)中選出能填入空白處的最佳選項(xiàng)，選項(xiàng)中有兩項(xiàng)為多余選項(xiàng)。

Lost in the Post

How would you feel if the letter you penned carefully and posted to your favorite star ended up in the recycling bin? That's where unopened fan mail sent to singer Taylor Swift was found in Nashville. ___1.___

Swift’s management said it was an accident, but dealing with piles of letters is a burden for most public figures. According to the BBC reporter Jon Kelly, at the height of his fame, Johnny Depp was said to receive up to 10,000 letters a week. ___2.___

The dawn of the digital age in which public figures with a Twitter account can be messaged directly has made the process easier. The White House says it deals with 20,000 messages addressed to President Barack Obama each day.

Some celebrities don’t want letters. In 2008, Beatles drummer Ringo Starr said that he would throw them out because he was too busy. ___3._ Robert Pattinson, star of the Twilight films, claims that he reads tonnes and tonnes of letters from fans, which takes up almost all his free time.

Many artists, however, outsource(外包) the task of opening, reading and replying. Sylvia “Spanky” Taylor, 58, has run a service in California that does just that since 1987. __4.__ Most letters are simply declarations of affection and admiration, she says. A few ask for money. A small number contain threats which require her to contact the celebrity’s security team and law enforcement.

The biggest problem for Taylor is working out how to deal with the correspondence(通信). Presents such as soft toys are sent to local hospitals, and most of the letters just get shredded and recycled.

__5.___ For some, this is enough, according to Lynn Zubernis, an expert at West Chester University. She says that the relationship between fan and celebrity may exist only in the mind of the former but it comes from a deeply-rooted human need for community.

A. This incident has caused a wide public concern about how the public figures deal with the letters or mails from the fans.

B. She and her staff deal with up to 20,000 items of mail a month on behalf of 26 celebrities

C. Accordingly, the correspondence problem has been difficult for the computer to automate.

D. Typically, correspondence is acknowledged by a photo with a printed “signature”.

E. How could he have enough time to skim through these letters one by one?

F. In fact, there is no alternative to deal with the problem.

G. Others do attempt to get through it themselves.

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科目：高中英語 來源：2016-2017學(xué)年西藏拉薩中學(xué)高二上第四次月考英語卷（解析版） 題型：完形填空

閱讀下列短文，從每題所給的四個(gè)選項(xiàng)（A，B, C和D）中，選出最佳選項(xiàng)，并在答題卡上將該項(xiàng)涂黑。

I have always believed that “Any man can be a father, but it ____ someone special to be a dad.” This is true. Since the____ of my son, Joshua, things have changed a lot in my life, but the____ have been good! My wife and I have been through many____ moments which have made both of us stronger.

My son was born ____ a serious breathing problem and he couldn’t keep his medicine down. He was put on several different medications, ____he did not get any better. My wife and I were both told many times by people that Joshua ____he was born early; he had not___ much weight since he was born.

As time progressed his regular doctor advised my wife and me ____ Dr. Eid, a specialist in Louisville. He was____by my son’s condition and so we were sent to Louisville’s Children’s Hospital. Joshua ____many different checkups. The____spent there was very demanding for my wife and me. But we did make it____. Our son Joshua was diagnosed (診斷) with asthma (哮喘), and with acid reflux syndrome (酸回流綜合癥). After the treatment, his____ began to improve slowly.

Joshua is 1 year and 1 month old now and his progress has been____ he is up to 27 pounds now. I keep telling my wife that if he keeps____ like this he might become a football ____someday. There is a ____ that has helped me get through these troublesome times, “Problems will either___you or break you.” When you think the__35__hours are upon you, remember the dawn is just in sight.

1.A. breaksB. takesC. tells D. brings

2.A. success B. illness C. death D. birth

3.A. needs B. becomes C. changes D. causes

4.A. boring B. challenging C. exciting D. puzzling

5.A. in B. at C. without D. with

6.A. but B. so C. since D. until

7.A. looked about B. looked for C. looked like D. looked at

8.A. kept B. lost C. gained D. raised

9.A. visit B. to visit C. visiting D. have visited

10.A. angeredB. scared C. disappointedD. shocked

11.A. went into B. put into C. went throughD. broken through

12.A. hour B. money C. time D. holiday

13.A. out B. down C. off D. through

14.A. diet B. skill C. healthy D. health

15.A. great B. slow C. little D. enough

16.A. walkingB. running C. training D. growing

17.A. supporter B. player C. coach D. fan

18.A. saying B. says C. said D. say

19.A. cheat B. make C. beat D. find

20.A. easiest B. latest C. brightest D. darkest

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科目：高中英語 來源：2016-2017學(xué)年廣東肇慶高二上期末考試英語卷（解析版） 題型：閱讀理解

A DAY OUT IN BRITAIN

Are you planning to visit Britain? Here are a few suggestions for a beautiful weekend away.

Bournemouth

This famous tourist town has 11 km of beautiful beaches. Last year, 10,000 tourists visited this beautiful town. It’s the perfect place to go swimming or sailing. There are lots of lovely parks and gardens to visit and it’s a great place to eat out. You can also go to a classical concert or go dancing in one of the nightclubs.

Stratford-upon-Avon

This was William Shakespeare’s hometown. He spent most of his life in this town and wrote his plays here. You can visit his house or see his plays at one of the Royal Shakespeare Company’s theatres. There are some interesting museums and lots of beautiful 500-year-old house. You can also go on boat trips and visit traditional English villages.

Alford

Deep in the Lincolnshire countryside is the pleasant market town of Alford. It is known for its five-sailed windmill(風(fēng)車). Have a walk round this lovely old place and you’ll see many pleasant houses from as far back as the 17th century. Captain James Smith, who was one of the founders of James town in Virginia, USA, was educated in Alford.

Bath

Most people come here to see the 2,000-year-old Roman Baths. But this city is also famous for its beautiful 18th century buildings and was the home of the writer Jane Austen. You can learn about her life at the Jane Austen Centre near Queen’s Square. In the past, Bath was also popular with the royal family and Queen Elizabeth I spent one or two weeks every year here.

1.What can visitors do in Bournemouth?

A．Enjoy plays.B. Go to museums.

C. Do sea sports.D. Visit fishing villages.

2.What is Alford famous for?

A. Its stars.B. Its market.

C. Its windmill.D. Its nightclubs.

3.Which place did a queen of England use to visit regularly?

A. Bath.B. Alford.

C. Stratford-upon-Avon.D. Bournemouth.

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