Question

【題目】美國某中學(xué)舉辦英語寒假訓(xùn)練營，開設(shè)以下課程 cooking, swimming, giving first aid，playing football / basketball。假定你是李華，請你寫封申請信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)。

內(nèi)容包括:

1.你感興趣的一門課程;

2.為什么想學(xué)這門課程;

3.你期望從中學(xué)到什么。

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours,

Lihua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I am more than delighted to hear that your school will start an English Winter Camp which includes a variety of courses, such as cooking, swimming, giving first aid, playing football or basketball I am interested in giving first aid and I am writing to sign up for the course.

I choose to attend the courses due to the fact that first aid is of great importance to people. If a person gets injured and needs medical care before a doctor can be called in, every second counts in saving life, in which case the knowledge of first aid can help save lives. Besides, I plan to study medicine and devote my life to medical research. Hopefully, the course will help me to learn about how to deal with medical emergencies.

I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達(dá)屬于應(yīng)用文，要求考生寫一封申請信，報(bào)名參加寒假訓(xùn)練營的課程。

第一步：審題

體裁：一般性應(yīng)用文——書信

格式：格式是書信，要寫明寫信的對象（即稱呼）和寫信人（即署名），正文前可適當(dāng)添加問候語，還要有結(jié)尾語

要點(diǎn)：要包括三個(gè)要點(diǎn)——感興趣的課程、為什么要學(xué)和期望從中得到什么。

結(jié)構(gòu)：為什么學(xué)和期望得到什么應(yīng)是重點(diǎn)表述的。先給出自己的選擇——對哪門課程感興趣。

第二步：列提綱（重點(diǎn)短語和詞匯）

be interested in ，sign up for the course，attend，be of great importance to people，save live(s)， deal with medical emergencies，

第三步：連詞成句

注意時(shí)態(tài)是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，表達(dá)為什么學(xué)要語氣堅(jiān)定，表達(dá)感謝要委婉。

第四步：連句成篇

第五步：潤色修改