Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國筆友David最近在學(xué)漢語,他給你發(fā)來一封電子郵件講述他對學(xué)習(xí)漢語興趣濃厚，但是他在學(xué)習(xí)漢語的過程中常常因為犯錯誤而懊惱。請你用英語給他回一封郵件。

內(nèi)容包括：

1. 鼓勵他繼續(xù)努力，正確看待錯誤；

2. 給David提出一些學(xué)好漢語的建議(至少兩條)；

3. 邀請他來中國玩。

注意：

1.詞數(shù) 120左右；開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總次數(shù)。

2.不能使用真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese.

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Yours，Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear David,

I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well known that Chinese is difficult to learn. One can’t avoid making a mistake when learning a foreign language.

Here are some tips on how to learn Chinese. First, don't be afraid to make mistakes. Making mistakes is a good way to learn how to say things right. Second, if you know a Chinese friend, ask he or she to practise with you. Third, you should spend more time practising listening to and speaking Chinese frequently.

I wish you success in learning Chinese. I am expecting to hear from you. At last, I welcome you to come to China.

Yours，

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇書信類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，結(jié)合具體內(nèi)容要用一般現(xiàn)在時，上下文意思要連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。例如 spend sometime doing something， success in doing something， expect to do something這些都是固定搭配用的比較好。另外在書信的開頭用的定語從句較好。I’m glad to receive your e-mail and happy to know that you are interested in learning Chinese. It is well known that Chinese is difficult to learn.