Question

【題目】假定英語老師要求同桌之間互相修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限1詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

A charity sale was successfully held on our school playground. In order to organize successfully, we had made the full preparations. When the day finally came, the playground were crowded with people, interested in the things on sale. There were variously used books and magazines, ranged from classic literature works to popular science books, as well as second-hand goods in good condition. The notebook copy from excellent students were the most popular. Not only students but also teachers come to offer us support. Some helped selling goods, and others even sang songs to promote the sale! By the end of the activity, to everyone's surprise, we had raised 5000 yuan in total! All the money collected will go to the students on need to help with their studies. It's such a rewarding activity which students all look forward to the next charity sale.

Answer 1

【答案】1. organize 后面加it

2．刪除made后的the

3. were → was

4. variously → various

5. ranged → ranging

6. copy → copies

7. come → came

8. selling → sell

9. on → in

10. which → that

【解析】

這是一篇記敘文。文章主要敘述了作者學(xué)校舉行的一次慈善義賣活動的情況。

1. 考查代詞。句意：為了可以成功舉辦它，我們進(jìn)行了充分準(zhǔn)備。結(jié)合句意和句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，organize后應(yīng)接it作賓語，指代上文提到的a charity sale，故在organize 后面加it。

2. 考查冠詞。此處考查短語make full preparations“充分準(zhǔn)備“，該短語中沒有冠詞，故刪除made后的the。

3. 考查主謂一致。句子主語playground是第三人稱單數(shù)，故謂語動詞也應(yīng)該用單數(shù)形式，故將were改為was。

4. 考查形容詞。此處應(yīng)用形容詞修飾名詞books and magazines，故將variously改為various。

5. 考查非謂語動詞。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知，此處是非謂語動詞作狀語，range和邏輯主語books and magazines之間是主動關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，故將ranged改為ranging。

6. 考查名詞的數(shù)。根據(jù)students和were判斷主語是復(fù)數(shù)形式，故將copy改為copies。

7. 考查時(shí)態(tài)。本篇講述過去的事情，故應(yīng)用一般過去時(shí)，故將come改為came。

8. 考查短語。此處考查短語help (to) do sth.“幫助做某事”，故將selling改為sell。

9. 考查介詞。此處考查短語in need“有需要的”，該短語一般作為后置定語，the students in need“有需要的學(xué)生”，故將on改為in。

10. 考查連詞。此處考查結(jié)果狀語從句such…that…“如此……以至于……”，故將which改為that。